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The Erif wrote:Update
This one was good, but you need much work on flow and poses and spacing etc.
First of all, when he ran in, his arms were put in an awkward spot, they look very stiff. Also, his leg poses look awkward because he is slightly too close to the ground it seems. Then, the wallflip, happened too quickly, and the poses were also off their too. I find wallflips to be very difficult though, so good job trying. Then the landing was off because he slowed down too quickly and it didn't flow well, and the transition into backflip, and the backflip itself, had some really bad poses and spacing. The backwards roll however wasn't that bad, decent job on that.
Sorry if I sound harsh, this animation really ain't that bad, you're doing fine man, keep up the good work
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Thanks man!
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I appreciate comments like that!
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WOAH WABAM I MEAN- Erif this wasn't up to your normal standard. The poses with the 3D weren't as good, movements weren't as good as they could be too. The run was fast yet the flip was slow. Courtesy, bra?
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Yes, finally! Erif I love this animation, just a little stiff, but good. You're damn close to high beginner, but try out something different. I see your animations have stickmen in that pose (with the legs :>).
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(gets slapped in the face by erif's bam, bliss) Nice continuation. Love the 3D :P
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Really sexy 3D, only problem is the momentum with the head when it goes into the 3D, it stops in mid air, whether that was meant to be slomo or what, but it was just off, he should've gone equally across the screen instead of going really slow. Thats the only problem, really nice. High Beginners.
-rawr
courtesy?
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-rawr
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rawr wrote:Really sexy 3D, only problem is the momentum with the head when it goes into the 3D, it stops in mid air, whether that was meant to be slomo or what, but it was just off, he should've gone equally across the screen instead of going really slow. Thats the only problem, really nice. High Beginners.
-rawr
courtesy?
Btw PM if you want some more CC
I agree with rawr. All momentum is lost during that 3D. Get that spacing right and this animation would be so sexy!
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