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He probably went to shade his eyes too quickly after he shot the arrow...but I'm no perfectionist.

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Just a little test on weight, I might do some more. Suggestions for others would be appreciated.

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If these walls could talk..

an effect test mostly, pretty poorly animated :/.

Test for Mrmilso, Punching bag

Old battle thingy, bad movements, great background.

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Dog and gun...test? maybe.

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Boring effects 1 and 2

Short Parkour

Stickman fight with background

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First Background animation

First stickman vs stickman fight

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I want to bump the thread because its on the 3-4 page....is this how its done?..and well i added another 2 animations..hopefully some more comments.. neutral)
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those are good, but i didnt see any choppyness in the last one
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High Beginner. Lol, I like the running in your newest creation, Idk why, but it looks funny. Probably because you barely can tell the arms switch sides, (If they do at all, Idk..) The kick test is pretty cool.
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nice one, i liked the newest creation anim, the blood was nice. Still, you have some things to improve on. Smoothness. Make smaller movements each frame and dont forget to ease. Your movements are choppy and stiff, but you have good ideas. Continue the good work.

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Med beginner, Still easing and stiffness seem to be a problem to you. I would also suggest looking at some physics tutorials, and fighting tutorials, the kick was executed very poorly. The animation ideas were good though!
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Med-beg I belive, It wasn't very stiff but in some places it was not eased at all, and in some there was to much, like in the kick animation, when an action is finished off you need to smooth it more in the end otherwise that that good I especially liked the blood :).

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you're good with effects like blood nd shit but you need to work on realism and stuff cz I noticed that in the gun test thing the bullet shells didn't land flat
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I can't see many flaws at all, physics on the fighting loop thing was a bit off, but mostly great! I loved the kicking test/punch, great physics and all.

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I made another Vid ^^^..mabye it might get me some more views..hope every1 likes.. sconfused)
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Another shooting test ^^^
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wow loved the bow and arrow one and good stickmaking skill , id say ur just scraping inter ther3 cheesygrin) /'
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another animation ^^^^
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Animation #1.Well, kind of good. It was a little stiff, and why didint that smoke dissapear ?

Animation #2.It was kind of wierd, becouse the man slid back when he shoots. And the bursts were wierd. But the animation itself was good.

Animation #3.Kinda stiff when he pulls back the arrow. And the shooting reaction was bad. Particles were nice though.



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