Joined: Tue Jan 23, 2007 12:39 am Posts: 2878 Location: New York
I loved this one. The movements were awesome, they flowed well together. The effects were cool too, the way the default stick broke apart was really good. The biggest problem with some of the other ones were that the movements were really small, and shaky. Try to exaggerate the major movements more, and it will definitely show up better. You're very close to intermediates, keep working. I'll make sure to keep an eye out for you. ;)
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Joined: Thu May 24, 2007 8:46 pm Posts: 2644 Location: TOKYO
I loved the one where the default gets smashed. the movements were suberb, like almost inter. :D The rest of them were really awesome too. I can't think of anything for you to work on, even though, everybody could work on something. but... good anis, Borderline interz! courtesy?