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ariel887
Post subject: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:20 pm

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NEWEST MOVIE YET ^^
GETING BACK IN TRACK!
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READ: this is my first vid after a 3 -4 month break so please take it easy on me ^^
comment please ^^


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READ: i now the ending was weird i had to hurry and finish it soo.
please comment ^^
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Running and slashing (full)

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Running and slashing ^^

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This is my first vid made, its not so good-.-"
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my first combo.gif



My way of walking

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Colour effect:

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MY running(NEW)

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Im Just testing my sword skills:

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i did my best XD
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bombomme
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:48 pm

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good, i guess, im not sure but im only just new also, but i liked it cheesygrin)
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ariel887
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:50 pm

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thnx alot biggrin) im just a newbe so, but i will post more vids
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Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:36 pm

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nice but tis choppy and stiff and you should add some more colour at the beginning, low begginner for now but this aniamtion shows ur gonna rank up soon, courtesy?
Stop looking at my sig do something useful.
bombomme
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:03 pm

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u need to work on stiffnes n a few more things, that u could fix up by going into my thread and pressing on the link on one of the comments, its called baha's tut, go there and read.

altough u have got some good movement, keep it up wink)
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TraceColour
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 1:16 pm

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wow, pretty nice for a newbie. :D You lack a whole bunch of easing, physics and you got some of stiffness, but, your animations do show osm improvement aye? heres a link to baha's tutorial http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662 that should help a whole bunch, it helped me but keep working on it, you should be heaps good in no time :D courtesy?
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Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 12:15 pm

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I can tell ur improving, ur color effect thing was really smooth in some parts but really cool video,and ur sword skill movie has some talent movement is still abit stiff but u could work that out :D

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 1:53 am

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ok they were.. idk, but u need to look at bahas tut fo sho, easing is a big problem and u will need to make your movemnts more realistic, i would say low-med beg kinda

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ariel887
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:53 pm

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i love norway
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Xemozu
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:22 pm

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Ari you aren't allowed to bump a thread if you don't have new stuff to post in it. Plus why are you asking for more comments? you can't expect to recieve comments +3 pages of comments from old animations.

Anyways pm me or a staff member to get the thread unlocked incase you have something to update with.

Unlocked on request.
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ariel887
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 3:02 pm

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SHOULD I FINISH THIS?

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Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 6:37 pm

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They are good..but most of your animations are pretty fast, and you don't use much EASING. You should use the speed limit (18) If you do use that speed limit, you should work on the stiffness and easing. Also follow the onion skin (The gray stuff thats left behind when you move a certain part of the stick) You have good effects, but like I said, they are too fast, and animations that are too fast, aren't that much to enjoy. I like the sword animations, and that shows that your going to be a good sword animator (good animator in general) If you follow my help (and others as well) and use Bahas Tut (listed on this site) You'll get to the top in no time. :D I'm gonna rate you..low beg. |low|---|you|-------------|med|
Courtesy please? in sigggy.
ariel887
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:08 pm

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Ok.. Thnx i will remmember that ^^
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Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:17 pm

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You had some good ideas...but you are VERY choppy.
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ariel887
Post subject: Re: Ari887 my first vid yet
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:21 pm

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Dude my vids aren't VERY choppy -.-"
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