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You honestly have potential to be an excellent animator. That actually looked like and old school animation. And as Sharpshooter's brother, I have mega respect for you and I've never talked to you.
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You look kind of choppy ,but you got better. 
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Yeah, it looks like you've gotten a little better :o
Just work on easing and stiffness for now now
Atm, low beginner but i think you'll get better
Just work on easing and stiffness for now now
Atm, low beginner but i think you'll get better
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Really good! I liked the camera movement, the action... But easing and flow is important :/ (physics too) Keep going man.
Courtesy?
Courtesy?
Pretty good, but the footplacement is off and it's stiff and choppy, but I loved the effects. Even so, you need a lot of practice. Low-med beginner in my opinion.
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Two new animations, trying to work on foot placement because that seems to be what everyone thinks my mistakes are.
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That was pretty cool Dan11neji. I love the sort of old school-ish style and spacing you used. Bit stiff in places but whatever.
Make more yeah?
Make more yeah?
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Good concepts, but the movements are a bit awkward, and there's a lot of downtime between action. The characters will move, then stop for a while, then move again. Keeping the action constant keeps the tempo up, and makes everything seem more fluid. Extra effects never hurt either.
Courtesy?
Courtesy?
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Sharpshooters brother? Welcome back man, your animations look nice. Just remember to make sure they flow, so each movement leads to the next, without much stopping then starting again.
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