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Post subject: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness (Curtzy Returned)
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:08 am

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Hey guy's, i'm back for the third time, ready to make even more animations. (Don't ask about the name, I made it when PivotRJ and PivotMasterDx were all awesome and stuf)
Here are my newest animations, and i may start to post some of my older, good ones. Until then, you just get to see me Run alot.

IF THE ANIMATIONS ARE MOVING SLOW, CLICK ON THE LINKS

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Newest to Oldest (Better ones shown)
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Pivot 1 animation
http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac27 ... s/Piv1.gif
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Quik run
http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac27 ... aserun.gif
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Particles
http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac27 ... ticles.gif
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A fight
http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac27 ... Fight2.gif
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Rockz (not gonna finish)
http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac27 ... /Rockz.gif
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Magic, as i call it.
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd29 ... ort2-2.gif
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Rust breaking run
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd29 ... ning-1.gif
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A Kick and reaction
http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac27 ... /Tests.gif

http://i907.photobucket.com/albums/ac27 ... /Fight.gif
A fightish thing
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd29 ... 4/Runz.gif
Start of something i didn't finish
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd29 ... Tripod.gif
Another start then finish
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd29 ... hysics.gif
AND WHAT DO YA KNOW
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd29 ... /Short.gif
Something i made for a comp somewhere else, don't rate, made very quickly.

Thats all for now, the rest were lost because Pivothost.org went down. Sayanora[/color]
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brace
Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:59 am

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lol sorry i said low beginner i was on my ipod lol now i see that it is like high beginner!!
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:01 am

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Lol, it's not low beginner by far

It's actually around med beginner
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 2:54 am

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brace wrote:no flow at all not to be mean but low beginner look at bahas tutorial it helped me

Are you sure your computer isn't lagging? Cuz being fluid has been one thing that people have always commented on.

I made less of them shown now, to help those that it does lag.
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 3:19 pm

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whats odd about ur animations is that they're flowing and eased (too eased i think) you need to work on movements more than easing, notice some animatiors .e.g. jon dont aim to make there animations super smooth? its usually all about where you place your arms/legs and how to correctly keep is realstic, it just takes practise, give it time and you will improve :D curts returned scool)
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:51 pm

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SilverSpoon wrote:whats odd about ur animations is that they're flowing and eased (too eased i think) you need to work on movements more than easing, notice some animatiors .e.g. jon dont aim to make there animations super smooth? its usually all about where you place your arms/legs and how to correctly keep is realstic, it just takes practise, give it time and you will improve :D curts returned scool)

Thanks, i've been thinking that i need to make an animation that isn't so 'stop and go'. I'm going to try and make an animation (with backgrounds) soon. But may want to make a new stk more suited for the job :P Thanks for the help
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 8:47 pm

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That thread is truly sexy lol. That run you have is one sexy run. Don't have much cc. Just work on effects i guess.
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:01 pm

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Yeh! i gotta say "Wow"! You're really good at easing and i see why you told me to ease my animations LOL thanksz for that! Anywaysz -good at easing- but i think your stikmens back were abit stiff and maybe bend them abit more. And for the arms, As the arms swing back, the fore arm-elbow shouldnt stay bent-make the fore arm bend back a bit.

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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:20 pm

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You have some good flow in your animations, and decent effects. But the main problem in your animations are stiffness. Remember to make sure you move every joint in every frame that's in action. Still, nice job.

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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:29 am

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Well I can certainly say your movement are fluid and your effects are good, but you are very stiff, that is the biggest thing that sticks out for me, make your movements a tad bit more dynamic, not too much though, it'll give your stickmen a more realistic feel if you do.

Really, other then that, easing looks fine, the animations aren't choppy, just a little advice: work on the stiffness issue, then add some more effects and backgrounds, and you'll be well on your way!

I'd say Med-beginner, keep it up!
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:02 pm

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really good run: high beg!!
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:31 pm

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New ani, gonna stop since its just to boring. Need to make something fun to watch...
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:52 pm

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Wow, your animations are pretty cool yourself. You just need to add more flow to your animations. It seems like there is way too much stop and go. Also kickass effects would be nice. Also, you need to work on reactions. Your power is fine though, that's good. Maybe even physics.

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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:56 pm

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Thanks, man. Here are 4 more animations
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Post subject: Re: Pivot7474's New thread of Sexyness
Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:28 pm

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I love your particle work there, mate. That one somehow gave me an idea for an animation; great job.

The second one, the fight, it had some nice movements in it, but the back was stiff and a little shaky on the blue guy. Also, the green guy's reaction after the kick was really strange; the way he fell made it seem like the floor was wet or something. I loved his floppy arms, though.

Magic. I liked that one alot for some reason; it had that old-school style to it-that added alot to it. The transformation from black to green was simple, but that added to the style of it. You could have worked a bit more on the particles, though.

Overall, work out that stiffness; it'll make your movements look alot better, and will be easier to flow them together. About high begginer, courtesy returned.
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