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Post subject: Smokey's thread. UNLOCKED! STARTING OVER!
Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 4:40 pm

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if your here for courtesy, then i might not give it right away and it depends on what the comment is like as if it is really simple likeeeee
dude, you rock!! courtz??


really long and god elaborate comments will be excepted but reasonable sized comments are what will get you courtesy.

Im am going to start my thread all over but i put my old anims in teh spoiler so dont mind those just look at meh new ones please :)
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ALLLLLL my old anims
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done 304 frames

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1rst version.......will be added on to

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the colors might be gif raped so look at the piv.
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(btw, these are my FIRST! effects i have ever made <:O perty awsummmm)

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a tad older
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^ was made on an airplane so dont tell me how bad it is ^
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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:48 pm

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Its a good animation, I like the blurs you used and the eased feel you gave it, but the flow was messed up, and the last punch was way off on the build.
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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:08 pm

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Omg a whole new thread, I can't believe it.. Anyways the effect/blur of the stick was cool and it was eased, but make it flow a bit more so it can look more... smooth? Anyways you like med-high good job :o? Curtz :p
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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:41 pm

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i liked it.

the slow mo was great, but the easing was a little off. the trails were pretty cool, but a little off again. just keep it up, it seems better than alot of effects i can do atleast.


I'd like to say med beginner, LIKE to say that, but I won't judge on the one animation. please make a few more so I can confirm this =]


good luck man


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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:53 pm

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yeah after all the collabs i entered i will post them here when they are open.
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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:51 pm

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Yeah, it seems like you got the blur effect down pretty well, but as for the punch, it was kind of lame... You should have sped him up right when he was going to punch, and make the other guy's reaction much more dramatic. It's too early to really judge your rank, so post other animations of basic things, like walking, running, punching, etc. so we can get a taste of how good of a pivot animator you are.

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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:12 am

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the link in my thread gos to my OLD thread you can click that if you want
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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:54 am

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dude, nice effects, the blurs where just amazing. but i cant really judge you on just one animation, you should make more so that people can judge you better than just one animation. i would say med-high beg.

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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:18 pm

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Nice work on the animation, i like the trails
Rank: Low Medium beginner
Tips: easing is ok, but dont use it to much
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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:04 pm

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so does this mean my thread is going to get locked now :l just like my other one should have
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:26 pm

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update bitchez scool)
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i am pretty proud of this one accually not alot of editing either so i thought i did real good i <3 me
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:50 pm

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This newest one is very realistic and nice spaced. But it has some problems.
1. No BG =D
2. Short!! :D
3. Those Movements.. You may know how to animate, but if your anims should look cool, your stick have to make cool movements like a butter fly twist for example. If it just makes a strange kick, its way worse.

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PS: You may know me from the PF.. :D
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Post subject: Re: Smokey's new thread. i return courtz
Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:35 pm

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lol yes i know you from pf but i knew you from here first ^^ and plus i didnt have any desire to add anything else all i wanted to do was try making flow if it did have any at all.
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 10:41 pm

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smokey23112 wrote:update bitchez scool)
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i am pretty proud of this one accually not alot of editing either so i thought i did real good i <3 me


that was good med high beg i would say
it was well animated and the movement was good

keep going cheesygrin) (thumbsup) (thumbsup)
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 12:54 am


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Your newest was really awesome compared to your others. The movements looked intermediate; keep making stuff like that and you'll be moved up in no time flat.
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