Very nice, i'm gonna go with +/- thing.
+Over all looks very good.
+Seems like you really put a effort in the part where he gets shot.
+The run before he got shot was really nice.
-When he jumps the box it seems too faast.
-After he jumpped you made him run really unsmooth
Basicly everything before he jumps the box could be inter, seems like you rushed to "finnish" it.
You could experiment with some effects and camera angles prehaps`?
Courtesy would be nice :)