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Post subject: Re: Lolzafish ~ Step back!
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 1:57 pm

I am Lolza
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An oldie of mine which I decided to add on to. Don't say anything about the blood, I know it's bad.

Thanks to Steven who (ages ago) helped me with the part after he got shot.
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Post subject: Re: Lolzafish ~ Shot in the head
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:34 pm

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Very nice, i'm gonna go with +/- thing.
+Over all looks very good.
+Seems like you really put a effort in the part where he gets shot.
+The run before he got shot was really nice.
-When he jumps the box it seems too faast.
-After he jumpped you made him run really unsmooth

Basicly everything before he jumps the box could be inter, seems like you rushed to "finnish" it.
You could experiment with some effects and camera angles prehaps`?
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Courtesy would be nice :)
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Post subject: Re: Lolzafish ~ Shot in the head
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 4:09 pm

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I like this animation, he looks great, almost no errors (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: Lolzafish ~ Shot in the head
Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 10:26 pm

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Lolzafish, when the fuck did you get this good at pivot? You are now officially alot better than me <3
courtesy??? ;)
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Post subject: Re: Lolzafish ~ Shot in the head
Posted: Sun May 08, 2011 3:57 pm

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Woo.
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Post subject: Re: Lolzafish ~ Shot in the head
Posted: Sun May 08, 2011 4:18 pm

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Lolzafish wrote:Image

Woo.

Most of the movements were pretty stop-n-go'ish, but they're still creative and fluid.
Also, some parts seem slightly over-eased and stiff, like when the stickman is getting ready for the run and the first 2 frames before it.
Otherwise, good job on it, I really love the running, although there are some tiny spacing issues.
I'd recommend working on flowing and spacing, that'll surely get you Intermediate.
Between Medium-High Beginner. Keep it up!

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