Link's Thread: Rustiness Averted

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Post subject: Link's Thread: Rustiness Averted

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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread of awesomeness

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That was ok I guess. It was a little fast. And we can't judge you on effects. You need to actually use the stickfigures. Don't get into the flashy/Spazzy mode.
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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread of awesomeness

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Thanks... really i just love to use effects but I shouldn't just do only effects!
Can't believe someone replied so soon.
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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread of awesomeness

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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread of awesomeness

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OK, your effects aren't too bad, but I wanna see more movements. Your basic average run looks shaky and stiff, so I think you should improve your run. Your realistic run isn't that bad. In my opinion it's too fast so you might wanna add few frames in.
I guess I can't really rank you just by watching some runs and a short animation, so go on and make more.
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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread of awesomeness

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Hmm I have to say med-beg

you should work on smoothness and you should move all the joints in each frame, also your physics are a little off. One more thing... I like your effects :))
Keep practicing

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I'd say Low Beginner- You're really stiff and uneased.. Pretty much, you need to go look at the Tutorials. Those should help alot.
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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread of awesomeness

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HUUUGE UPDATE
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COME ON GUYS COMMENT!!!
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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread: Midget's and other stuff

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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread: Midget's and other stuff

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I think that some of them look choppy and a few look a tiny bit stiff. I think that if the stiffness and choppiness get fixed then you will be a better animator.
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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread: DBZ has you cornered

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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread: DBZ has you cornered

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Work on smoothness, love the effects, keep up the good work :P
Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread: DBZ has you cornered

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i like you're animations, they are good but you need to practice a lot more, you got some shakiness , like on the run, you need to do like 10 frames to look realy good, also i just loved your effects
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Post subject: Re: Sync's Thread: DBZ has you cornered

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Try easing a little bit. The realistic run test looks good, but too fast. Make animations a little bit slower.
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