Beginner Hall 2
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Junior
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DieHard
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You animation Has a few errors/flaws. It seems to lack flow and easing, and the figure seems to have little or no reaction to the blast.
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Junior
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Thx so what rank do u think i am?
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I would say Med-High-Beginner: You animations are great, they just are stiff in places Work on the stiffness.
You got promise, man!
Courtesy?
You got promise, man!
Courtesy?
Junior
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Thx, dude anyone else?
Junior
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Honestly, i dont say its tht good lol
But thx means alot :)
But thx means alot :)
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Sweet beam man liked the punch add some flow.
good foot placing work a bit on stifness.
Ithink high-med beg. Or just high..wait I dont know ! dont judge me :( lol.
high ! :)
good foot placing work a bit on stifness.
Ithink high-med beg. Or just high..wait I dont know ! dont judge me :( lol.
high ! :)
Junior
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Really? thx :D
Junior
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Really? thx :D
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Youre way too stiff. Also, you dont get easing. Moving youre stick figure really slow doesnt mean easing. First you go slow, then youre stick should get momentum, go faster, then slow down if he choses, therefore losing his momentum and slowing down. Read some tutorials too, and I would say Medium beginner, sorry. Courtz?
DieHard
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your kamehameha seems flowty and when it blasts out there should be more counter reaction to the stick like blowing backwards and the legs where pretty stiff while in the air shooting it
your kamehameha seems flowty and when it blasts out there should be more counter reaction to the stick like blowing backwards and the legs where pretty stiff while in the air shooting it
Junior
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UPDATE
2 Anims
Wat do u think?
2 Anims
Wat do u think?
Junior
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OMG!!
Yet another update
2 anims :D
Yet another update
2 anims :D
Junior
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Location: Milton Keynes, England
Your animations have good easing and placment. THe only other two things I would say work on is physics and flow.
The hammer test was really nice, but I didn't like how in the end it was just one constant frame.
Lovin' your animations.
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The hammer test was really nice, but I didn't like how in the end it was just one constant frame.
Lovin' your animations.
courtsey returned
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