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Post subject: A NEW SNAZZY ANIMATION! Please Rank!

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Welcome to Snazzy's Thread


Hello guys, my name is Greg... I hope to become interz by the end of 2012.

Latest Animations:

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*New* High Beginners Run
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Don't Smoke.
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Soccer Fail
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Running Loop_2
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Last edited by Snazzy on Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:49 pm, edited 20 times in total.
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Post subject: Re: Hello, I'm Snazzy :3

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Well welcome!There is not much to go off of, but a nice start. But it is very stiff. KEEP PRACTICING!
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Post subject: Re: Hello, I'm Snazzy :3

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Just an update, added an animation and added some old ones of mine.
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Post subject: Re: PLEASE RANK ME :3

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I made another animation so please rank me.
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O.K., for a newcomer you're very good. It looks like you have a natural talent for pivot. On your new animation, "SummerSault Out" the run looks very stop and go. To be more realistic when animating a run across the screen try keep a constant speed. Remember that is for the run across the screen ONLY. Easing is still very important. Also your animations have stiffness. Basically that means the stick man is very, umm... stiff. To make animations more realistic move MOST TO ALL JOINTS (little red dots) every frame when animating. This may sound tedious at first, but, in time, it will become a second nature, kinda like easing.
Also, on your "New Landing" animation, it lacked power when he hit the ground. Try to add tremors when
something heavy (like a stick man) hits the ground. It shows a LOT of power. You basically have to go over the basics, and for that I recommend this tutorial right here.You look like a low to medium beginner to me and you also have a lot of potential. Keep Animating! Courtesy? (That means try comment on my thread because I commented on yours)
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Post subject: Re: PLEASE RANK ME :3

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very very good animation snazzy
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The somersault out one looks awesome, but there's not enough build up for the somersault..
Also, still a little stiff.
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I haven't made an animation in a while -_-
I hope you guys like it :3
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Post subject: Re: ツ You should probably rank me now...

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I made a new running animation.
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I like the flow and smoothness. However, I think you should try doing like a fighting pivot. Just to try it out. Its fun at times :) Courts?
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Some times I look at the inters and ask myself
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This one is one of you better ones. I like the landing,but you screwed up at the end when the stick left the screen.One, he is supposed to gather speed and stay at a constant speed. That's called spacing.And when he left the screen, he straightened up. His upper body should lean forward.
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Alright, you seen to have the flow of the arms correct. But ask yourself: do people actually run like that?Try using a different base by the way. it's okay to use other people's bases as long as you give credit. His origin is too close to the ground, so there is no realistic space for him to run. And his run is kinda choppy too.
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Post subject: Re: ಠ_ಠ WHAT RANK AM I NOW?

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I'm back on DD. Hopefully I'll keep animating now. I got bored over the summer.

I also added a new landing animation. I hope this one is better then my last attempts.

My YT account is PivotMasterEN if you wanna go check me out there. I make mostly comedy videos though. I'm gonna start to make a couple updates with the animations from now on out.
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Post subject: Re: Two new animations

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alright, two new animations, please check them out and rank me.
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Post subject: Re: RANK ME! 3 new animations

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Ok, i cleaned out some animations from the front page of my thread. Also, i added a soccer fail.

Please rank me, i really want to get better at pivot, just let me know what i am.

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Post subject: Re: RANK ME! I have new animations

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Alright, i added the dont smoke animation. So please rank i really think i improved
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