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Rank me please.

Low Beginner: 2; 50%

Med Beginner: 2; 50%

High beginner: 0; No votes

Intermediate: 0; No votes

: Total votes : 4

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Alizarin

Post subject: Alizarin's Thread - Bolt Running

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 5:21 pm

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Check every one of these people out:

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Deleted ALL my animations and reset my thread, so bare with me as I start adding my animations. I felt all of my aniamtions were bad and had a LOT of room for improvement. So newest will be showing at the top and the others will be under the 'Others' category and click my animations for the .piv file. Enjoy! biggrin)

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MANY more to come soon! (thumbsup)

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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 5:01 pm

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mr.flip

Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 5:52 pm

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It was pretty good, in the first one, you did your flips really well.
It looked really realistic, but the movement wasn't that good, in
conclusion if I were to judge I would give you beginner med :D.

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Alizarin

Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 6:03 pm

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mr.flip wrote:It was pretty good, in the first one, you did your flips really well.
It looked really realistic, but the movement wasn't that good, in
conclusion if I were to judge I would give you beginner med :D.

Thanks, yeah I agree, and I had to add a running animation after I commented on yous wink)

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Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 6:05 pm

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Very well, but you should work on your foot placement .Also, when you save the gif. file it must look like this:

[img]http://WARNING: Imageflock is currently blocked for use on these forums./img/1343153059.jpg

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If you are still having troubles with your animations try to upload them in different site :) .

Alizarin

Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread

Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 7:43 pm

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Tweaker wrote:Very well, but you should work on your foot placement .Also, when you save the gif. file it must look like this:
[img]http://WARNING:%20Imageflock%20is%20currently%20blocked%20for%20use%20on%20these%20forums./img/1343153059.jpg
[/img]
If you are still having troubles with your animations try to upload them in different site :) .

Thanks, all the others are fine but the flip one is quite slow compared to what it is was, while making it. But when i tried to increase the frame rate, it became too fast sconfused)

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Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread

Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:46 am

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I Really Like Your Flips, They Are Pretty Good. But If We Take A Look On The Running Or The Walk, You Need To Make Them More Smooth. But I Say You're About Low-Med Beginner. (I'm Sorry, But I Have Seen So Many Ranking On This Site So)
But I'm Jealous 'Cause Your Flips Are Really Good. (thumbsup)

Good Day~.

Alizarin

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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:01 pm

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Nick_Crowman wrote: If We Take A Look On The Running Or The Walk, You Need To Make Them More Smooth.

Thanks, and i know what you mean. I will try to improve the smoothness in both. Again, thank you so much! (thumbsup)

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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:39 pm

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Smoother run and walk added.

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Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread

Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 6:43 pm

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They are all quite good, the flips were slow but I think that would have been due to the upload, and not really your fault
I wouldn't know what to rate you as, as I've only just started, but overall, great animations!

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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 10:30 am

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Fungicide wrote:They are all quite good, the flips were slow but I think that would have been due to the upload, and not really your fault
I wouldn't know what to rate you as, as I've only just started, but overall, great animations!

Thanks so much. yeah i dunno how to solve that speed problem...

E: Kellawgs helped me fix it

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Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread - Vote in Poll please.

Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 6:13 pm

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Bump.

New animations:

Punching Test

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Gun Test

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Also, vote in the poll please (thumbsup)

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Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread - Vote in Poll please.

Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 4:59 pm

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You are getiing much better, and are learning the basics,
but something I have critisize on is the punches.
When you punch, you have to make it have some power,
so to do that I would suggest moving the elbows a little
backwards and make a big movement in the punch. By
doing this it will show some power, also if you want to
make it a little stronger you could make a running seen
and a straight punch. These are just minor problems,
If you keep working on it it will be much better, good luck!

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thepivotstudent

Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread - Vote in Poll please.

Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 5:24 pm

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Alizarin wrote:
Alizarin's Thread

Favourite:

.piv | .gif

Short and sweet, but I really like it for some reason

Best (IMO):

.piv| .gif

Simple walking animation.

Newest:

.piv | .gif

Quick Gun test.

Other(s):

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Punching Test
.piv | .gif
A short punching test, kinda crap though.

Flip Test
.piv | .gif
Special thanks to Kellawgs for fixing the speed problem!

Run Loop
.piv | .gif
Basic loop & mmy first uploaded animation

More to come!

These animations are Low Beginner.

All of your animations show a great deal of choppiness and stiffness. And shaky areas as well. In your punch test animation there was so little spacing those movements weren't punches at all.

In the run loop he suddenly went up in the air. What was that for? And you spaced your movements so low that that was barely a walk too.

You should really try easing your animations to show better powers and feelings of the basics. Try clicking through your frames to see if any of your joints are falling out of place so you can remove the choppy and shakiness in your animations. Then make sure you move every joint in each frame for your stiffness to reduce.

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Alizarin

Post subject: Re: Alizarin's Thread - Vote in Poll please.

Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:48 am

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wow thanks a lot for such a detailed analysis. But i have to agree, stiffness is kind of my biggest error. I try to move every joint in every frame but sometimes I forget and then it becomes annoyingly stiff... But i will take into account everything you said, so thank you again!

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