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My Rank is .....

Med Beginner (:I)
4
19%
Med-High Beginner (:))
7
33%
High Beginner (:D)
6
29%
Borders (o.O)
2
10%
Intermediate (O.O)
2
10%
 
Total votes : 21
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Drakath
Post subject: Hero's Bloods Newest.
Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 9:52 am

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Welcome

Weolcome my Pivot thread. My name is Burak. Sorry for my english because im turkish.
I Starded the Pivot six-half months ago. :)

BEGINNER

NEW
Hero's Bloods
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i know, my animation is like a olix's animation, but my animation is not stolen :)
ANIMATION İS DİSORTED THEN DO İT GİF

Piv File :)

Olds

The Chaos War Piv File
Sword Master Piv File
Unfinished Ninja Piv Only

Tests

3D Punch Piv.
Beam Oblivion
Shooting
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TheUaman
Post subject: Re: Drakath's Thread ( İntermediate Attempt ) !
Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 1:55 pm

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Your animation good but you use backgraund but is very awkward. Effects i liked it but movements very bad. Easing down. U work.

Best Wiches :)

My english very bad. I using GoogleTranslate
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Post subject: Re: Drakath's Thread ( İntermediate Attempt ) !
Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 2:01 pm

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Well, honestly you're not close to interz, you need to work on movement a lot, but your effects are good. So meh, Low-Med Beginner.

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Drakath
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 2:01 pm

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Thanks :) Ok.
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 2:14 pm

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i disagree id say your med beginner, bordering onto high beginner.
you need to make sure your sticks are moving all their joints when moving, it makes it look more realistic. you also need it to flow more with more focus on movements. you are in the same boat i was in not too long ago, try avoid effects for now, trust me it will only help, focus mainly on movements looking as real as possible, also try to avoid backgrounds for now (i know its unfair but it will work!), you will get a lot better, check out my thread and look at my improvements if you want to see it in action. keep it up, i expect to see some awesome movements coming from you soon :D

If you would like some thorough CC, please PM me and I will make sure to comment on your thread as soon as I can.

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Drakath
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 2:18 pm

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Thx man :D And ok :)
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:42 am

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Verry Colorfull Animation u.O

i think he high beginner - inter
u.u
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Drakath
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Posted: Thu Jun 16, 2011 7:42 am

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Ty man :)

EDİT : High Beginner - Inter = Borderline (borders) :D
Drakath
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 1:13 pm

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where is the comments ??
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 1:21 pm

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@ top animation
it looks relay nice, just a little stiff in a few movements in some parts(lol), but overall i enjoyed it, relay nice, like i writed before xD
i would think you are about low/med beginner, i am not relay a good ranker because i self animating for fun, so sorry about my bad ranking xD
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:05 pm

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Hi there Drakath,

CC at the TCW:
I really love the animation, you really have a creative mind. It is kinda stiff, so in EVERY frame move EVERY joint, yes, every single one of them. Work more on the bloods and the smokes and the reaction of the part where the blue guy uses his sword the block the laser, it looks kinda weird. Otherwise it is really nice and smooth. Well done Dràkáth. High Beginner, good luck on your career!

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Drakath
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 3:37 pm

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Thanks man :) And ok.
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 10:11 am

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Sword Fail and Big Beam Obliv Test !
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 8:10 pm

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Don't wanna repeat with that the others said but you need to work on stiffness. That mean every frame try to move every joint of the stick figure. Sounds tedious at first, but in time it basically becomes a second nature, like easing. You've definetly got a lot of creative ideas and your effects are great! Keep practicing and you'll surely become intermediate in no time. Overall i'd rank you as borderline high beginner (On the verge of becoming high beginner). Courtesy?
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 11:33 am

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I understand you :) and OK
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