TheRalunaClan wrote:Your name isn't horrible, just odd. Haha, anyway. Low beginner, a MAJOR flaw i noticed was the foot placement. Don't take the capitilized major as an insult. I'm not very good myself haha. Work on easing the animation, to reduce all signs of choppyness to zero. That's all the advice you're gonna get from another low beginner.. Lol, oh one more thing. I wouldn't suggest any major backgrounds untill you've improved a little.
Ok, there were much bigger flaws than foot placement, cc time
1. The animation had a decent following and made sense (kind of) but you are incredibly stiff making the animation choppy, and just unpleasing to the eyes, to fix this, you need to move every joint in every frame.
2. Some of the poses are awful, they are unrealistic and all round wierd looking, think of your self in real life, would you stand in such a wierd position, try to look at images and videos to try and focus on.
3.the goku guys feet slide and jerk everywhere and it looks horrible, that needs work as well, you need to make sure the foot is in the same place in every frame of that position.
4. Physics, the physics are really off and just look all in all bad, they need to be as a real person would do, or however you want your style, but either way, keep it consistent because some parts are choppy and fast, and some choppy and slow, choppy everywhere, because you have no flow, which you need for proper physics, flow is kinda difficult to explain, check some tutorials.
5. when the two characters blasted whatever they were blasting, it moved really slowly, that needs some work. Normally a blast would move really quickly, so yeah.
I just highlighted the main flaws, you have plenty of other issues, but these are the main ones, currently your rank is low beginner.