... Well because those last 2 comments probably didn't make much sense, I want to say your new animation was an improvement. way better spacing, The running and the sort of intimidating growl in the end was pretty sick. Um, in the end the grey guy is reacting way to much on that landing, So I'd advice you if you continue you it either make him spring up ( not literally) from that position because thats much all you can do or fix his reaction. Next, when the black guy slows down from the run he seems a bit to stiff and it looks like you got lazy. Fix that back shakiness when he stops. When he pops up and looks up slow it down then i think it'll look better. His hands and arms look weird after he stops but it's flowed and easy when he moves back. I hate this TRGG tributed animating style and thats what most beginners see so they mimic this shitty stiff, uneased style and then they ask why it's low beginner. so don't do it, keep that flowy style you had during the end of the first black stick figure move back, that looked great. Imo when people do TRGG arms during running it looks completely retarded because when people run in real life you can see there arms swing back to give him momentum to swing forwards and run faster. Don't do this Animation style, it ruins your originality and I'm hoping to see this finished.
FYI: Flow - The body's movement that matches the momentum. and for the most point you are constantly moving and especially in action animations you are mostly almost always moving so it's important to keep "Flow" unless stopped as I said.
Still Med-High, but improved a bit.
Edit: Btw that running was great better then mine at times ("The Legs")