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Oliver

Post subject: Oliver's Thread: New Layout and a new animation

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 9:25 pm

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Location: Los Angeles, California

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Beginner - December 7, 2011
(Became a Beginner, and slowly progressed into a better animator).

Intermediate - May 4, 2012
(I will prove that I deserve this, count on it).

Veteran - Not yet

Elite - Not yet

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Inferion
(My best friend here on Dark Demon, I love this guy).

Phazon
(A really great pal, and amazing animator, It's really fun to talk to him too).

Nutcracker
(Man I respect this guy, He is also a great animator, I am very glad to be his friend).

Demon
(He's a really good buddy of mine, and he's a fantastic animator as well).

Psych
(I love him with passion, he's a pretty swell guy).

Blot
(An excellent friend, I'm glad I met him).

Understick
(A really good friend of mine, great animator as well).

Memphis
(Wow, this guy is super nice, and one of the best animators I've stumbled upon).

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(Sharpshooter, Nutcracker, Phazon, Alez, Pyro Mecha, X Man, and Inferion).

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Current Rank: Intermediate

Legal Name: Elias Zuniga

Age: Fifteen

Music Interest: Southern Rap Music

Race: Mexican

Location: Los Angeles, California

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Wow! I have finally reached the title and rank of Intermediate. My position here is a bit unstable, but I will prove to all of you that I do deserve this. Anyway, please enjoy my animations. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Feel free to ask for any Pivot Files or Stick Figures I really don't mind.

(Their will be links to download all of my Stick Figures or Pivot Files, but if you can't seem to get them 'PM Me' about it. I might not have some of them anymore though).

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Ichigo Kurosaki Sword Thing (Newish) | Pivot File (Download)

Grimmjow Jeagerjaques Run Thing (Very Old) | Pivot File (Download)
(This one is pretty old the movements aren't up to par with my new ones, but I love this animation).

Tarantula (Unfinished and Old) | Pivot File (Download)
(This was a failed joint, and I only did my part on this. The movements suck, but I like it).

Default Punches (Old) | Pivot File (Download)
(I don't like this one very much, but I feel that it belongs here).

Last edited by Oliver on Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:47 pm, edited 72 times in total.

Mr.Blue

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 9:31 pm

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Definately med beginner. I would think your high beg.
It's very smooth and the movements are unique. The effects are amazing aswell.
Overall rank: high beginner
Please show more animations soon.

http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=86202

Oliver

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 10:08 pm

I Love Inferion

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Location: Los Angeles, California

Really? Thanks. cheesygrin)

Any CC? ( Not much in it I know ,but try your best I want to get better. )

Lionheart

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 10:14 pm

DD Viking

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You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.

Spoiler:

Oliver

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 10:21 pm

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Lion wrote:You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.

Ah thank you very much I'm working on something with Doddsy's Base at the moment.

Oliver

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 7:22 pm

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-Update second one on top.

Zax

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 7:28 pm

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You really need to work on your poses. When you're animating try to imagine the stickfigure was doing it in real life. A lot of your stickfigures would have broken limbs if they did stuff like that. O.o

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Oliver

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 7:42 pm

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Styk wrote:You really need to work on your poses. When you're animating try to imagine the stickfigure was doing it in real life. A lot of your stickfigures would have broken limbs if they did stuff like that. O.o

Nah I would but I'm to lazy at the moment thanks for the CC.
Any thoughts on the movements and not the limbs?

Pinkot

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:52 pm

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Your animations are smooth and flowy but they lack power and poses are very odd. Just play with spacing until it looks nice and make the pose of the stickman natural.

Spoiler:

The Beige Tower:183 frames/1100 frames
Thanks Daniël for making my avatar transparent!

Oliver

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 9:08 pm

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Location: Los Angeles, California

Ah, thank you.

Radium

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 9:15 pm

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Lion wrote:You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.

I second that.
Your movements are really great, mate. Your floppy style is almost near perfection, just tweak some weird poses and polish your movements.
High-Beginner. Courtesy would be nice, given I didn't ask for it for like 2 months.

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Lukas

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 9:46 pm

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How long do you animate?

The quality of your anims is very high, but these are too short to judge them.
I dislike the bonebreakers, they looks weird and unrealistic,
but you animate with cool flow and smoothness.

Oliver

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:29 pm

I Love Inferion

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Location: Los Angeles, California

Chess wrote:How long do you animate?

The quality of your anims is very high, but these are too short to judge them.
I dislike the bonebreakers, they looks weird and unrealistic,
but you animate with cool flow and smoothness.

About 30 minutes or more roughly that I suppose.
I'll work on the back breaker thing to I'm ex flasher and this Pivot thing is sort of new to me.
Thank you and everyone who posted CC.

Oliver

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2011 1:40 am

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Location: Los Angeles, California

Another thing check it out.
Spoiler of Shadow vs Energy
No comments yet?

Last edited by Oliver on Wed Dec 14, 2011 4:36 am, edited 1 time in total.

Lionheart

Post subject: Re: My Thread

Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:32 pm

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The newest looks promising.. good effects and nice movements so far. You should get to finishing it, 'cause I'm keeping an eye on this thread.

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