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Wow! I have finally reached the title and rank of Intermediate. My position here is a bit unstable, but I will prove to all of you that I do deserve this. Anyway, please enjoy my animations. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Feel free to ask for any Pivot Files or Stick Figures I really don't mind.

(Their will be links to download all of my Stick Figures or Pivot Files, but if you can't seem to get them 'PM Me' about it. I might not have some of them anymore though).


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Ichigo Kurosaki Sword Thing (Newish) | Pivot File (Download)

Grimmjow Jeagerjaques Run Thing (Very Old) | Pivot File (Download)
(This one is pretty old the movements aren't up to par with my new ones, but I love this animation).

Tarantula (Unfinished and Old) | Pivot File (Download)
(This was a failed joint, and I only did my part on this. The movements suck, but I like it).

Default Punches (Old) | Pivot File (Download)
(I don't like this one very much, but I feel that it belongs here).
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Definately med beginner. I would think your high beg.
It's very smooth and the movements are unique. The effects are amazing aswell.
Overall rank: high beginner
Please show more animations soon.
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Really? Thanks. cheesygrin)
Any CC? ( Not much in it I know ,but try your best I want to get better. )
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You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.
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Lion wrote:You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.
Ah thank you very much I'm working on something with Doddsy's Base at the moment.
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-Update second one on top.
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You really need to work on your poses. When you're animating try to imagine the stickfigure was doing it in real life. A lot of your stickfigures would have broken limbs if they did stuff like that. O.o
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Styk wrote:You really need to work on your poses. When you're animating try to imagine the stickfigure was doing it in real life. A lot of your stickfigures would have broken limbs if they did stuff like that. O.o

Nah I would but I'm to lazy at the moment thanks for the CC.
Any thoughts on the movements and not the limbs?
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Your animations are smooth and flowy but they lack power and poses are very odd. Just play with spacing until it looks nice and make the pose of the stickman natural.

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Ah, thank you.
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Lion wrote:You should put 1 or 2 frames between the pose before the kick and the kick itself; it seems as though his leg just pops into a kick without any real movement behind it. Other than that, the animation is damn near flawless. Good job on it. Make more, possibly something longer? I can see you in the Intermediate Area soon.

I second that.
Your movements are really great, mate. Your floppy style is almost near perfection, just tweak some weird poses and polish your movements.
High-Beginner. Courtesy would be nice, given I didn't ask for it for like 2 months.
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How long do you animate?

The quality of your anims is very high, but these are too short to judge them.
I dislike the bonebreakers, they looks weird and unrealistic,
but you animate with cool flow and smoothness.
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Chess wrote:How long do you animate?

The quality of your anims is very high, but these are too short to judge them.
I dislike the bonebreakers, they looks weird and unrealistic,
but you animate with cool flow and smoothness.

About 30 minutes or more roughly that I suppose.
I'll work on the back breaker thing to I'm ex flasher and this Pivot thing is sort of new to me.
Thank you and everyone who posted CC.
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Another thing check it out.
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The newest looks promising.. good effects and nice movements so far. You should get to finishing it, 'cause I'm keeping an eye on this thread.
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