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You seem to have a nice grasp on things. The foot-placement is almost PERFECT, it just needs some polishing. Try to make sure that you noticeably move every joint of your stickman in every frame to remove the stiffness that you currently have.
I'd say either Low or Med Beginner for now; you show a lot of potential, though.
I'd say either Low or Med Beginner for now; you show a lot of potential, though.
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Well, you've almost got walking perfectly. The only problem is that the stick figure slows down every time he puts his leading leg down. While walking, you don't slow down arbitrarily like that, so simply keep the stick figure moving at a constant pace and you will have mastered walking :)
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BTW, sorry for the triple post, but no one wants to tell me how awesome I am.
BTW, sorry for the triple post, but no one wants to tell me how awesome I am.
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Something i have noticed that you are missing is consistency
Its like this
Punch stops thinks about it, then punches
But everything except for the end of the Yogurt inspired one is actually really good
Its like this
Punch stops thinks about it, then punches
But everything except for the end of the Yogurt inspired one is actually really good
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Its good but too many tiny movements. Try practicing transitions of movements by doing sequences of short, simple movements. (Ex: Small animation consisting of lifting objects, sitting down, walking/running loops, etc). Then once you have that down, I'd practice some more by animating some more complex movements(Ex: a sprin to-jump, back/front flips, fighting combos, throwing/catching objects) after this I'd continue to practice in this fashion. In between you can make some long animations to make all that practice pay off! One concept to complex movements is understanding the way your own body moves, so you should try some of the movements in a safe area, but none of that crazy batman shat. Good luck though you look good so far.
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http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=90326
Animations
http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=90326
two comments!!!
I guess that title paid off.
Thanks for the comments guys, I'll do whatever you told me.
edit: this is just a copy of my AC thread, so it's not really that new.
I guess that title paid off.
Thanks for the comments guys, I'll do whatever you told me.
edit: this is just a copy of my AC thread, so it's not really that new.
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^Not bad at all man. The run in was pretty good, but the main problem I saw was the physics on the jump right afterwards. He stayed in the air for too long, it just looked a bit too floaty. Aside from that you need to work on your poses. The way he moved while in the air looked very unnatural, he shouldn't have stayed upright for so long before flipping over. His actual reaction to hitting the ground was alright, though I think it could have been exaggerated a bit more.
All in all just fix up your physics and make more poses a bit more realistic, you're about Medium Beginner, keep it up.
*btw im very tired right now so i may have just mumbled a bunch of nonsense
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Thanks, I'll make sure to fix those problems.
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Soo, that's nicely done. Good and smooth. Med-Beg! 
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Thanks. Update, first crane kick (I think it's called that way).
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