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Post subject: [[AZRA's Thread]] Get Over Here!!!
Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 8:19 am

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GET OVER HERE!!

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i have to say... "movements" wise, i think this is probably one of my best... and i really saw my improvement since i made an animation like this before... i really love this cause pudge is my favorite DoTA hero so.... "FRESH MEAT" cheesygrin)

Here's my old animation cheesygrin)

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Arm Break
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Tried a different base... I kinda like it, but i think i'll stick with the old one...I don't know how im gonna continue this... but in case you have an idea, maybe we could joint it but... meh cheesygrin) just tell me if you want the piv cheesygrin)

Fire Punch
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man, i actually really liked how i made this, but i really want some CC as to how it looks for other people, or if i did the spin correctly, and if the spacing is okay too... oh, and i inserted the gray guy cause im practicing punch reactions at the moment so i thought maybe i could put him in there... cheesygrin)


Transformation-ish
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just toying with the new Transparency feature of Pivot 4... liking it so far... but meh I kinda like the animation i made... how bout you? cheesygrin)

2 Punches
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Im not really good with punches and i might have some rust soooo, cut me some slack cheesygrin) .. i animated the gray guy first before putting in the red guy so there might be some problems, sorry for that...





Pretty New

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Two Hit Combo -I never really make combos, and i guess you could see why... and don't mind the end, i was just... bored cheesygrin)
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Sword Test - Blood by IPA
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Spear to the Head - made this for a friend, blood by IPA
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Lazer Blasting Violence - the blood stks are from IPA and Masturfurbix from Droidz
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Pretty Old
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Headshot - Rust breaker biggrin) *Smoke by Atokniiro*
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Stealth Kill - first time trying the X-Ray Cam... *Smoke by Atokniiro*
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Fatality - Got lazy on the last part... Black Screen FTW cheesygrin) *Blood by IPA (Ipwnall)
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Random Axe Thing -
Blood bit when he get's hit with the axe is IPA's
I don't know the rest, cause they're from some mega packs i got from Droidz
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Sleep
Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]
Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 4:01 am

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Uhm its very choppy and unconsistant at some parts.
You should definitely look at some of the easing tutorials.
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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]
Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 4:03 am

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Wow man you're not bad at all.

The headshot one is pretty good, but you need to speed your movements up a little bit. Slow spacing can look really good but try not to overdo it. Also your foot placement could use some work, when he gets shot his feet shake around a bit when he falls. You did a pretty good job on the reaction, and you're very decent at animating blood.

Keep up the quality of this one and you'll be intermediate very soon. Just try not to get lazy, keep your movements looking natural, and you got it. Good luck.

Edit- Have you had an account here previously?
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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]
Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 4:10 am

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Hey AZRA! Just came to drop a comment. (:
That was pretty good man! Better than most of the animations most new comers make. I love the rust-breaker one. The movements were fantastic in my opinion. Anyway I suck at criticism, so I can't tell you what needs work. Nice job over all, if you need a comment again be sure to contact me!
AZRA
Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread [[UPDATE]]
Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 7:25 am

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@Sleep - Yeah, i'll make sure i do, thanks cheesygrin)

@Kellawgs - I used to have an account in Droidz, but i stopped for a year... so my thread is long gone now... so i thought a fresh start would be good here... and thanks for the comments, they're very much Appreciated (thumbsup) ... oh and here's my thread in Droidz ... if you're interested biggrin)

http://droidz.org/board/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=41243



@Oliver - Thanks, means a lot... (thumbsup)

@All - Thanks for commenting cheesygrin)
After you check out my Thread...

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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 1:20 am

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YOUR HEADSHOT ANIMATION WAS BEAUTIFUL (thumbsup)
Except the guy falling fell too slow, when his head fell it bounced weird and you didn't move the legs when he hit the ground.

Overall this is a good animation though. Keep working and you'll get better (thumbsup)
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AZRA
Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 2:23 am

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Thanks bro, about the head shot thing... it's my first animation in about a year, so i can't really see the flaws while animating... thanks for pointing them out (thumbsup)
After you check out my Thread...

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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Sat May 26, 2012 11:22 am

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Oh, no! Iam PATHENIC, you are 3 times better than me!!!! cry) cry) cry)
AZRA
Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 12:54 pm

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Don't compare yourself to me, cause you're better than me in your own little way... Thank's for the comment by the way, and please... keep up the good work... wait, they said you were a troll, this comment doesn't seem trollish to me =))
After you check out my Thread...

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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 7:25 am

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verry good! Looks awesome! You cool dude! PM me. Btw. For us to talk u have to PM me or the admins get pissed for double post
Don't rectify, signify. we shoot anyone who does the opposite.
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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Mon May 28, 2012 11:09 pm

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good to get mean about the basic concepts. you need to improve the smooth easyng a well and also the reality. and so worth it bro


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oh my god! he killed kenny: '(
AZRA
Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 7:11 am

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Thanks ^_^
After you check out my Thread...

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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 6:43 pm

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I swear that is Atokniiro's dust pack and in fatality that is Ipwnall's, if they are, you MUST give them credit.
Now, your animations are smooth but sometimes the physics needs a bit of work.
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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Wed May 30, 2012 5:55 am

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Thanks... and sorry... i'll put credits ^_^
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Post subject: Re: AZRA's Thread... Updated... and still brutal ^_^
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:42 am

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Dude, Those are some wicked animations bro, i mean it, its so Fluid. Man i wish i could make stuff like that, Although, it could be a little smoother in some points, just try to ease a little more
Hey people, I am a young animator so yeah i have a lot to learn so if you got any tips id love to hear them.

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