TRINHTUANTUNG wrote:Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!
You're a dick. ^
I've found quite a few flaws in this.
I thought the running was odd because it was bouncy and un-eased. It took me a while to realise what was wrong. The thing that struck me first was the movement in the legs, both legs seem choppy and don't flow very well, remember to follow the onion skin for flow.
The other problem I'd address is the flip at the end. I thought this was really weird as there was a lack of build up and momentum. It's difficult to see the amount of power behind this flip as it seems 'floppy'? Anyway, I was going slightly off topic. The flip, I was going to go on about the end pose. The pose was quite bad as the stickman's back is vertical. Judging by the speed and distance, I'd expect the stickman's back to be arched, with his arms infront of him. I thought the flip was quite unrealistic.E* The majority of the poses were quite odd too. I don't want to spend a lot of time explaining what poses are off because there are quite a lot.
Overall, you need to practice easing and spacing for the most parts. Once you've got the hang of those, work on your poses. (Or the other way round) Keep practicing man, you'll get better. :)Is this a joint with Strider? It doesn't look like it. Also, ignore the bellend above me.