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Unfinished joint with Strider
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Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!

TRINHTUANTUNG wrote:Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!

You're a dick. ^

I've found quite a few flaws in this.

I thought the running was odd because it was bouncy and un-eased. It took me a while to realise what was wrong. The thing that struck me first was the movement in the legs, both legs seem choppy and don't flow very well, remember to follow the onion skin for flow.

The other problem I'd address is the flip at the end. I thought this was really weird as there was a lack of build up and momentum. It's difficult to see the amount of power behind this flip as it seems 'floppy'? Anyway, I was going slightly off topic. The flip, I was going to go on about the end pose. The pose was quite bad as the stickman's back is vertical. Judging by the speed and distance, I'd expect the stickman's back to be arched, with his arms infront of him. I thought the flip was quite unrealistic.

E* The majority of the poses were quite odd too. I don't want to spend a lot of time explaining what poses are off because there are quite a lot.

Overall, you need to practice easing and spacing for the most parts. Once you've got the hang of those, work on your poses. (Or the other way round) Keep practicing man, you'll get better. :)

Is this a joint with Strider? It doesn't look like it. Also, ignore the bellend above me.

TRINHTUANTUNG wrote:Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!

cool spam bro

Also to the second comment, this was made in about 5 minutes, I'm rusty as shit but i wasn't really going for Elite or anything, don't quite need the realism yet, thanks anyway i spose'
>Also yes it is a joint, strider made the starting kick and the standing up part, but he was lazy as shit, so i just left it as short as it is

comedian wrote:

TRINHTUANTUNG wrote:Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!

cool spam bro

Also to the second comment, this was made in about 5 minutes, I'm rusty as shit but i wasn't really going for Elite or anything, don't quite need the realism yet, thanks anyway i spose'

Well, that was 2 hours wasted. :P
Once you've made an animation where you have taken your time, please let me know. I would like to see it. ;)

AlchemistEP wrote:Well, that was 2 hours wasted. :P
Once you've made an animation where you have taken your time, please let me know. I would like to see it. ;)

Will do

Once u failed, let me know, i will insult you along with AlchemistEP! Your welcome!

TRINHTUANTUNG wrote:Once u failed, let me know, i will insult you along with AlchemistEP! Your welcome!

You're not a good animator yet you insult everyone else.
You're just a waste of sperm and you should cut your throat with some glass. Seriously.

AlchemistEP wrote:

TRINHTUANTUNG wrote:Once u failed, let me know, i will insult you along with AlchemistEP! Your welcome!

You're not a good animator yet you insult everyone else.
You're just a waste of sperm and you should cut your throat with some glass. Seriously.

Thank you my LOVELY BUDDY! You are the BEST! I admire you!

TRINHTUANTUNG wrote:Hahahahahaha! This is one pathenic, pointless joint!

Your animations are disgusting go fuck yourself man.

Is this really what this section has become, spam?
I thought there was mods/admins that take care of this issue or am i wrong?

^This one is your best one so I'll be talking about it.

Alright, so at the very beginning, when he ran forward, you could have eased into it more. Also during that run, the poses on his arms were off. The next part where he kicked, the poses were also very off. It looked very awkward, I think it would have looked better to keep his back leg down during the kick. The next two kicks looked pretty cool and original, and the only main problem I see is the arm poses again. It looked like he wouldn't have been able to stop himself from hitting the ground there. Now the next part when he did the flip thing and hit the wall, it all happened too suddenly. Smooth out your movements more in future animations. Also when he stood up from that it just looked weird the way he did it. Next, when he started running, he just burst right into the run with no anticipation. One again, smooth it out some more. The run itself was good though, but then next flip and landing were very off. He flipped too fast, and the poses and physics need alot of work. As for the landing, he just landed in a very awkward pose, and his balance looked very off.

All in all, just take more time on your movements and try not to rush anything, and work on your poses. You're about Medium Beginner, keeeeppp it up, and good luck.

Kellawgs wrote:Alright, so at the very beginning, when he ran forward, you could have eased into it more. Also during that run, the poses on his arms were off. The next part where he kicked, the poses were also very off. It looked very awkward, I think it would have looked better to keep his back leg down during the kick.

Also when he stood up from that it just looked weird the way he did it.

Just saying, those parts were mine, so don't judge him on my laziness

Strider wrote:

Kellawgs wrote:Alright, so at the very beginning, when he ran forward, you could have eased into it more. Also during that run, the poses on his arms were off. The next part where he kicked, the poses were also very off. It looked very awkward, I think it would have looked better to keep his back leg down during the kick.

Also when he stood up from that it just looked weird the way he did it.

Just saying, those parts were mine, so don't judge him on my laziness

Really? Haha I didn't know this was a joint.

Lol, it says right above it mate. Get some glasses

I wear glasses everyday!