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Post subject: UPDATE! New Animation: Breaking The Rust, CC would be nice
Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:59 pm

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Breaking The Rust

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Constructive criticism would be much appreciated, thanks!
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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - After 2 years, I'm back with a bang!
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 12:42 am

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It started off really stiff, but as the animation goes along it got better. Try to loosen up the joints and movements. I'd say you're high beginner.
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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - After 2 years, I'm back with a bang!
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:44 am

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First I must say, I'm sorry. This is no where near intermediate level. Nor high beginner for that matter.

The first major issue I see from you is the ultra stiffness. The stick figure never moved his back once when he walked, make it look totally unrealistic. I can't say anything about shaky movements because it doesn't seem to look like a critical error. Which means animating over time should fix that. To make sure you remove the stiffness or at least lessen it try moving the joints in each stick figure in every frame. Try not leaving a single joint untouched.

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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - After 2 years, I'm back with a bang!
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:01 am

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Your animations are very nice, but they are stiff .You should check your easing too .I like them :) .Also check some tutorials for walking and movements (: .Remember that you should move all joints .Practice makes perfect! :]
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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - After 2 years, I'm back with a bang!
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 11:03 am

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I don't know why, but I really like your animations. You may not be that good at the basics, but the idea was really cool. And therefore it was really enjoyable to watch. The part when he was spraying with some gun at the end, and the 3d right after that was done quite well.

By the name of your thread I'm guessing you're somehow rusty, and I believe you'll improve quickly. Keep up the good work, man :]
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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - After 2 years, I'm back with... rust!
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 7:44 pm

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Thanks for the CC guys, keep em' coming, and they are very stiff because I have an insane amount of rust right now from 2 years of no animating. I've got a new animation coming up which should hopefully not be as stiff.
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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - NEW ANIMATION! "Higher Powers"
Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 10:37 am

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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - NEW ANIMATION! "Higher Powers"
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:42 pm

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Bump, c'mon guys I need CC on this.
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Ember
Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread That No One Comments On - NEW ANIMATION!
Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 9:27 pm

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Bump again, wow, you guys sure like ignoring me.
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Ember
Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - NEW ANIMATION! "Higher Powers"
Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 6:03 am

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Bump yet again, can I just have 1 comment please?
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Post subject: Re: Ember's Thread - NEW ANIMATION! "Higher Powers"
Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:32 am

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Bump again, can I please just get one single comment on this?
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Post subject: Re: It's been a week, and still not a single comment. Seriou
Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:40 am

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Your movements are actually pretty good, and I like your style of animating, the main thing I see flawed in your animation that you've got to give CnC to is your foot placement, it's all over the place. Just work on that a little I think it will make a large improvement.

Be a babe and post on my thread please? <3
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Post subject: Re: UPDATE! New Animation: Breaking The Rust, CC would be ni
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2012 2:54 am

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New animation is out guys! It's an attempt at breaking the rust, and I need CC.

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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:01 am

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Was cool man, keep making more.
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Post subject: Re: UPDATE! New Animation: Breaking The Rust, CC would be ni
Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2012 9:12 pm

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Judging by your anims, you are a rapist. NAH man! Your animations are very good and you have potential! Keep going all the way to ineterz and beyond! and once again, i was JOKING about the rapist thing..
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