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Post subject: THE REDS THREAD updated today RANKME!!!:D
Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 6:09 am

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based off this how good iam cheesygrin) (OLD LOOK AT THE NEWER ONES THIS IS CRAP)
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This a new one my sad transformation cheesygrin)
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working on my punches how is it?
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:57 am

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Low beg. some of those movements are quite choppy, and it needs to have a bit more power in those attacks! however the combo is pretty good and you have plenty of potential! Keep it up and watch some tutorials about flow and easing! (thumbsup)

Edit: you have updated and it is much better! Keep up your good work! cheesygrin)
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:48 pm

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I actually thought the spacing used on those punches showed a decent amount of power. What you need to work on is easing your movements. Once you start applying easing to your animations you will notice a fairly big improvement, so go check out the tutorial section here. The next thing that needs working on is foot placement. Your stick is sliding all over the place, try keep the feet in the same position until they lift off the ground.

In general your movements need to be smoothed out, which will come as a result of fixing up your spacing and by easing your movements, so yeah check out the tutorials asap. You seem to have a decent grasp on poses though, which most beginners find hardest to get right. Its good to see the arms and legs are in appropriate positions in relation to the movement you animate.

You probably are low beginner at the moment, but you are off to a good start, with a proper understanding of spacing you could make some really good stuff (thumbsup)
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:06 pm

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THANK YOU!! ill post more stuff lik running and flips so i can see where iam with that but thank you for the advice and the tuts cheesygrin)
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 5:02 pm

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yes rez told almost all i wanted to say but whatever.
You have good potential thos ieeas were grate later in future you will make that animation as elite if you stay active what i actually wanted to say is good job overall. :) keep practicing ;)
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:02 am

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Rez pretty much told you everything. Just ease your movements and such. Also work on the foot placement man. It's all over the place.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:03 am

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Rez pretty much told you everything. Just ease your movements and such. Also work on the foot placement man. It's all over the place.

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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 3:56 pm

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CCheck out the tut section
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 4:06 pm

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its stiff and uneased,visit some tuts they will help you.
For now you are a low beg.
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Post subject: Re: THE REDS THREAD updated today RANKME!!!:D
Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 10:27 pm

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i update frequently so com back and see how i progress
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 12:39 am

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Post subject: Re: THE REDS THREAD updated today RANKME!!!:D
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:17 am

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104 ppl and no new comments if see my thread drop a comment advice on wat i ned to improve on is the only way to improve so comment Plz scool)
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Post subject: Re: THE REDS THREAD updated today RANKME!!!:D
Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:02 pm

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Hi welcome to DD and I have to say that your transformation was great, but on
your jump I noticed that your leg was very shaky, but it was smooth. to start off
use small movements and when you are about to jump make a sudden movement.
You are doing great since you are starting off, but right now you should check out
some tutorials low beg, close to med. biggrin)
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 10:39 pm

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On your newest: terrible foot placement, the kicks are much too slow, there's a lot of shakiness in the head and you shouldn't really be using effects until you're better at pivot, using effects like you have is just like using short-cuts in animating. It doesn't help us or you at all. Good to see you have some knowledge of smoothness, though. But you have to remember, if you over-ease everything and make everything too smooth, you'll lack realism.
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