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Post subject: YongWalRang - Here's some stuff.
Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 3:24 am

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Last edited by YongWalRang on Sat Apr 23, 2011 9:34 pm, edited 62 times in total.
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Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 5:00 pm

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Really good for your first post. I think your movements flowreally well. I think that effect when his face got chopped off was kinda choppy. There should have been some blood there. But don't worry, i'm pretty lazy myself when it comes to effects. I'd say you're a high beginner. Keep it up! ;)

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Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:37 pm

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Very nice. You moves are great. Needs some dynamic, camera moves.

Borderline.
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Post subject: Re: Yong's anims
Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:59 pm

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Your gonna be fucking awesome with time and practice.

Movements were fluid, they had a great flow into each other. Very little was wrong with it. The ball had some funky physics, needed more pop from the ground.

Make something longer, with the same fluidity. And i see a move up is on order.

Impressive animation.
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Post subject: Re: Yong's anims
Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2008 2:15 am

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High Beginner?
BORDERLINE?!
Whoa snap, never thought I'd see the day, lol. Thanks guys
Effects and camera angles are things I need to work on, just never been the greatest things I could do. (that and I'm probably just too lazy)
Guess it pays off when I take it slower and work more on it. I'm gonna try my best on the next one, maybe I'll get interz before the year ends yet!
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Post subject: Re: Yong's anims
Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 7:03 pm

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Nice, very smooth.

But please, dont give us that link, paste another. It just comes a lot of pop-ups, adds and it takes ages to load.

But otherwise, very good, border!
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Post subject: Re: Yong's anims
Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:15 am

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that was pretty good easing but the blood effect was poor but i would say border line
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Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 12:39 am

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Your animation was very good. The movements were like water. Good stuff man. Keep it up, and make a new 1 so i can seeeeee!
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Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 3:51 am

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Epic bumpdate. If this is against a rule, then my bad, haven't been here in forever (obviously) and stuff could be different from other forums or from before.
Anyway, three of my new-ish animations. Check em out :D
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Post subject: Re: Yong's anims
Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 1:44 pm

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Hi.

Poison:

Great effects. Nice editing with beneton gif editer :D
The jump and fall seemed quite stiff, but w/e.
I actually really liked the blood on it, and the reaction on the guy getting hurt was good.


Random stuff:
Nice physics, easing could be a bit better at some points, but very good.

Headache:
Nice effects, once again, easing could be a bit better, nice idea, also the back seems a little stiff at the end D:


I think you're borderz xD.

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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 2:12 am

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Update. New animation. Posted edited and non BMG version.
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Post subject: Re: Yong's anims
Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 3:04 am




Woah. Pretty much sums it up, that was amazing! I'm going with med interz I'm surprised you haven't been bumped yet! I found nothing wrong with the animations.

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Post subject: Re: Yong's anims
Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 3:15 pm

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I love your new animation (knowdown).
It's well eased and the physic is good. I love the BMG/ground effects.
There is only 1 thing I dont like, its the stickman apparition/vanishing, it doesn't fit with the background and it's too quick.

In general, this pivot rocks :D

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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 9:41 pm

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yup borderline good effects and stuff but make something longer
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 9:59 pm

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Awesome Yong. I'm DF Btw

You're really close to intermediate.
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