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Laquisha the Black
Post subject: Knocked Down
Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:29 am

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Intermediate Animations


Knock Down [.Piv]
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Intermediate Attempt, FINISHED [.Piv]

Beginner Animations


Another Combo [Piv.]
Last edited by Laquisha the Black on Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:58 pm, edited 26 times in total.
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ipwnall wrote:If I remember right the only guy that picked on me was skype when I was a new VIP, but now the joke's on him because I say mean things about him behind his back wink) wink)
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ 3-D + Movements
Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:15 pm

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Nice. I love how you animate. Although, the backflip was sort of at a weird angle, like the arms were in sort of an akward position. Also try to make your movements flow more. Your 3d was over exaggerated thickness wise, being it either too thick at times, or to thin at times. At the beginning the front leg was a tad stiff, but that might have been intentional. You might want to try to add more flow into your animations, also because I have seen some of your other animations and they can be stop and go. Otherwise, they're pretty smooth, nice ideas, and for the most part, nonstiff. I say High beginner, close to intermediates.
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And because I'm a whore. DDCX Vet predictions:
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Skype:
"I was very surprised and I wouldn't be surprised if he got vets with it."
HBomb:
Pandamanama>vets
Lolzafish:
Pandamamamuhdiushdiuhswd - Veteran
arch:
pandahafkhjhajaor- maybe vets
Cinnamonbun:
Pandamananaman- Veteran
moneymac:
Panda(maybe vet)
Kell:
Pandamanama- From the comments I've seen, Veteran
BenJammin1391:
Pandy should be vets
Cavolia:
In everycase, your movements are Vet to me.
Lionheart:
I'd say your movements are pretty much Veteran.


Thank you Shell for the VIP.
Laquisha the Black
Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:34 am

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Thanks Pandah.

Update, spicy animations #1, please comment.
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ipwnall wrote:If I remember right the only guy that picked on me was skype when I was a new VIP, but now the joke's on him because I say mean things about him behind his back wink) wink)
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:46 am

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some fancy sticks you made in that spicy animation, too bad we didn't get to see much of them. you keep on getting better man.
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You can pm me for a comment on your thread. :)
I'm always up for a good joint.

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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:35 pm

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Shell wrote:some fancy sticks you made in that spicy animation, too bad we didn't get to see much of them. you keep on getting better man.


Thanks Shell, lately I've been inspired by heavy spacers, like PivAd. Keep the comments coming please, I'd like to know my rank.
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:35 pm

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You look obviously intermediate but you REALLY HAVE TO MAKE A LONG ANIMATION. There's not much CC except the top one was a lil shakey.

Btw can I use you base ill give credz?
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:06 pm

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Spicy Animations #1
I really liked the bouncy feel to the animation, although I thought he should've reacted a bit more the first time he smashed against the grey ground/platform. It just seemed it needed a bit more of an impact. The most noticeable flaw in the animation was the feet sliding in the beginning, it didn't really matter but it seemed a bit shaky.
It was quite entertaining though.

3D + Movements
The beginning pose/movement in the animation looked really awkward and the arms seemed to be spazzing out a bit at places. The first 3D movement looked quite good, although the second seemed rushed, making the back flip look quite weird.
Although it was a decent attempt at 3D and had a fast pace feel to it, which I liked.
I'd say your main problem in that animation was possibly the foot placement, but it can be fixed easily, so don't worry.

Overall
You're obviously very good with the movements you animate and you can definitely add small but decent effects that give the animation more appeal (e.g. Camera movements and 3D ).
Although most of your animations so far are quite basic ( Basically just movements and such ), with not much length to them.
If you just increase the length and add a bit of detail, maybe even some more effects you will probably have a chance at Intermediate.

Good luck with animating and good work with your animations so far.
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:23 pm

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Bump, thanks for the comments guys, please download the piv in my new animation preview, thanks.
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:46 pm

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Very nice and smooth.
high beginner / intermediate.
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:24 am

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Thanks for the comments, anymore please?
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ipwnall wrote:If I remember right the only guy that picked on me was skype when I was a new VIP, but now the joke's on him because I say mean things about him behind his back wink) wink)
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:36 am

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Eyheyheyhey! I love your stuff man, I really want to see you in intermediates soon. I honestly don't know how you aren't already...

But anyways, those movements were sweet, and the 3d was done quite well. The only thing I noticed was at the end of Spicy Animation #1 when he waves, it's a little uneased.
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 4:02 am

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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:20 pm

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Thanks a lot for the comments, but can I get anymore CC on the Christmas Joint so far?
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ipwnall wrote:If I remember right the only guy that picked on me was skype when I was a new VIP, but now the joke's on him because I say mean things about him behind his back wink) wink)
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Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1
Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:27 pm

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That was great K9! You remind me of PivAD a little. I like your really fast, bouncy style. The landing had the foot sliding but it was barely noticible, it was great though.
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Laquisha the Black
Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Christmas Joint Preview
Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:40 am

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^ Courtesy returned.

My foot placement does need a lot of work, anymore CC or comments you guys could give?
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