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Kanine

Post subject: Ripped to Shreds

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:29 am

James
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Intermediate Animations

Ripped to Shreds

First animation in awhile.

RAGE

Don't touch me noob.

Split!

Hopefully you guys find this animation a little longer than the others. First attempt at a tear too btw, xD.

Combo Fade

Going to start posting back in this thread now, hopefully I've broken most of the rust. :) I'll make something longer with a background soon.

Some Movements:

Just trying to break this rust and get back in the swing of things, CC is much appreciated.

Fall Down?

Feel free to give me as much criticism as possible as I'm trying to get as good as I once was or even better, thank you.

Knock Down [.Piv]

Intermediate Attempt, FINISHED [.Piv]

Beginner Animations

Another Combo [Piv.]

Last edited by Kanine on Tue Jun 21, 2011 10:16 pm, edited 38 times in total.

My Youtube ¦ Intermediate Thread ¦ Freestyle Thread (Used for Rust)

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Andrew

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ 3-D + Movements

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:15 pm

i always lose.

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Nice. I love how you animate. Although, the backflip was sort of at a weird angle, like the arms were in sort of an akward position. Also try to make your movements flow more. Your 3d was over exaggerated thickness wise, being it either too thick at times, or to thin at times. At the beginning the front leg was a tad stiff, but that might have been intentional. You might want to try to add more flow into your animations, also because I have seen some of your other animations and they can be stop and go. Otherwise, they're pretty smooth, nice ideas, and for the most part, nonstiff. I say High beginner, close to intermediates.

Animations | Art | Tumblr

Kanine

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:34 am

James
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Thanks Pandah.

Update, spicy animations #1, please comment.

My Youtube ¦ Intermediate Thread ¦ Freestyle Thread (Used for Rust)

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~ Michael Jordan

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shell

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:46 am

DD SUPREME

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some fancy sticks you made in that spicy animation, too bad we didn't get to see much of them. you keep on getting better man.

my thread. / Lovely Art <3 / DD ranks

You can pm me for a comment on your thread. :)
I'm always up for a good joint.

Kanine

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:35 pm

James
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Shell wrote:some fancy sticks you made in that spicy animation, too bad we didn't get to see much of them. you keep on getting better man.

Thanks Shell, lately I've been inspired by heavy spacers, like PivAd. Keep the comments coming please, I'd like to know my rank.

My Youtube ¦ Intermediate Thread ¦ Freestyle Thread (Used for Rust)

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Trollin

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:35 pm

ibtrollin

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Location: New York

You look obviously intermediate but you REALLY HAVE TO MAKE A LONG ANIMATION. There's not much CC except the top one was a lil shakey.

Btw can I use you base ill give credz?

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Snuggles

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:06 pm

oath m8
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Spicy Animations #1
I really liked the bouncy feel to the animation, although I thought he should've reacted a bit more the first time he smashed against the grey ground/platform. It just seemed it needed a bit more of an impact. The most noticeable flaw in the animation was the feet sliding in the beginning, it didn't really matter but it seemed a bit shaky.
It was quite entertaining though.

3D + Movements
The beginning pose/movement in the animation looked really awkward and the arms seemed to be spazzing out a bit at places. The first 3D movement looked quite good, although the second seemed rushed, making the back flip look quite weird.
Although it was a decent attempt at 3D and had a fast pace feel to it, which I liked.
I'd say your main problem in that animation was possibly the foot placement, but it can be fixed easily, so don't worry.

Overall
You're obviously very good with the movements you animate and you can definitely add small but decent effects that give the animation more appeal (e.g. Camera movements and 3D ).
Although most of your animations so far are quite basic ( Basically just movements and such ), with not much length to them.
If you just increase the length and add a bit of detail, maybe even some more effects you will probably have a chance at Intermediate.

Good luck with animating and good work with your animations so far.

Kanine

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:23 pm

James
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Bump, thanks for the comments guys, please download the piv in my new animation preview, thanks.

My Youtube ¦ Intermediate Thread ¦ Freestyle Thread (Used for Rust)

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WtfMaster

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:46 pm

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Very nice and smooth.
high beginner / intermediate.

My thread!

Kanine

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:24 am

James
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Thanks for the comments, anymore please?

My Youtube ¦ Intermediate Thread ¦ Freestyle Thread (Used for Rust)

"I can accept failure, everyone fails at something. But I can't accept not trying."
~ Michael Jordan

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Teh Doc

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:36 am

GRODON FERMAN

Joined: Sat Jan 17, 2009 11:01 pm
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Eyheyheyhey! I love your stuff man, I really want to see you in intermediates soon. I honestly don't know how you aren't already...

But anyways, those movements were sweet, and the 3d was done quite well. The only thing I noticed was at the end of Spicy Animation #1 when he waves, it's a little uneased.

Mmmm, courtesy flavor.

THE JFLICK

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 4:02 am

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very smooth
check meh out
http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=70509

Kanine

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:20 pm

James
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Thanks a lot for the comments, but can I get anymore CC on the Christmas Joint so far?

My Youtube ¦ Intermediate Thread ¦ Freestyle Thread (Used for Rust)

"I can accept failure, everyone fails at something. But I can't accept not trying."
~ Michael Jordan

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PHAZON

Post subject: Re: K9's Animations ~ Spicy Animations #1

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:27 pm

I Got Dat

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Location: England

That was great K9! You remind me of PivAD a little. I like your really fast, bouncy style. The landing had the foot sliding but it was barely noticible, it was great though.
Keep going,
Borderline.
Courtesy?