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Hydru's thread. Updated May 28, 2012
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not bad, but the whole red guy landing should of been better. I felt he saw that coming and it would been cool he crouched further down seeing as he literally took quite a fast drop thus all the momentum you had from the fall just lost.
I mean look at the blue guy you transferred his momentum off that all perfectly, his leg flexed to show him storing the energy from the initial jump. I know you said you focused on the blue guy, but that's merely an excuse for being lazy. You def. show you have that interz. experience, but just the fact you you didn't properly animate the fall just ruined it.
Heck you had the right idea with the sliding foot, but if you would just followed through with him crouching it would of looked a tun better than it does now. Just focus on the key points of momentum and you'll def. get better.
*You must be prepared for harsh critique. What I offer is in sight on what you should of done and you may get a offended, but you must understand if you can't take the heat get out of the kitchen of art.
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Spirit wrote:
not bad, but the whole red guy landing should of been better. I felt he saw that coming and it would been cool he crouched further down seeing as he literally took quite a fast drop thus all the momentum you had from the fall just lost.
I mean look at the blue guy you transferred his momentum off that all perfectly, his leg flexed to show him storing the energy from the initial jump. I know you said you focused on the blue guy, but that's merely an excuse for being lazy. You def. show you have that interz. experience, but just the fact you you didn't properly animate the fall just ruined it.
Heck you had the right idea with the sliding foot, but if you would just followed through with him crouching it would of looked a tun better than it does now. Just focus on the key points of momentum and you'll def. get better.
Alright, thanks for the comment man. It's true it would probably look much better with an actual landing, I might edit that later.
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Yeah the fight animation did have a similar feel to my DDC11, the way you did most of the movements were done in a very similar style. Not that I'm claiming ownership for that style haha! It's the first time I've done it myself.
The animation itself was generally nice. There were a few lazy parts such as the two kicks colliding and the kick at the very end, the diving elbow also lacked power. Generally though the animation was pretty spot on and definitely had a very distinct style to it.
The other animation was very nice actually. Flowed super well and had no flaws that I could see.
Nice work.
The animation itself was generally nice. There were a few lazy parts such as the two kicks colliding and the kick at the very end, the diving elbow also lacked power. Generally though the animation was pretty spot on and definitely had a very distinct style to it.
The other animation was very nice actually. Flowed super well and had no flaws that I could see.
Nice work.
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I think that your movements lack in transition and in harmony; it has this generic intermediate feeling. Moreover, there's still those awkward poses and this static feel to your animations.
You should try adding more transition between your movements, and making sure that there's proper momentum and power before every succeeding pose that you will do, and remove that abrupt and awkward feeling. Also, try to make your camera angles more dynamic, as your animations feel static.
You should try adding more transition between your movements, and making sure that there's proper momentum and power before every succeeding pose that you will do, and remove that abrupt and awkward feeling. Also, try to make your camera angles more dynamic, as your animations feel static.
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I like your style its fast and smooth but you need more storyline I think your animations are pretty good and I can't see any faults but try harder with storyline and backgrounds.
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Spoiler:
-I saw PivAd made a new YT video and I browsed through his old stuff. Got a littleWoop, I see you misspelled "inspired" in there. Nothing else but my refined grammar nazi squad cliche :3
Anyway, I see you really are getting somewhere with your newest updates.
For example, I'm really diggin' your newest one, the kicks were absolutely fabulous!
It feels really nice to see a more experienced animator do stuff like this, and really inspiring too.
There really is nothing else to be said about this one animation, except maybe the abrupt stop at the end.
But man, you got moves! Please keep it up like this, you really made my day with that animation, I really really love it.
I don't usually ask for this but wow, courtesy would be nice (:
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