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Low Intermediate
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Kap'n Krunch
Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: Behemoth vs Phazon
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 1:59 am

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That was gorgeous, the card movement was absolutely fantastic. The explosion was simple but nice and the 3d was so great it's just fantastic, I have nothing to criticize atm but keep it up.

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Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: Behemoth vs Phazon
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:57 am

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Whoa really perfect card movements creativity backgrounds and 3D. Gorgeous. (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: Behemoth vs Phazon
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:33 am


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Amazing job, Behemoth.
Great flow in your movements, I really like the scene when Samus started to run.

I really enjoyed that. (thumbsup)
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Oliver
Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: Behemoth vs Phazon
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:32 pm

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Nice animation man! The movements were just fantastic. (:

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Is that okay? The animation is still a little raped sorry.
Behemoth
Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: Behemoth vs Phazon
Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2012 7:19 pm

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Thanks oliver, also, thanks everyone for the lovely comments :D.
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Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: Behemoth vs Phazon
Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:02 am

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Not bad Behemoth. Truly very well done and had a nice flow going on. The action was well portrayed as well the nice holographic shine of the car spinning.The running was well played and the 3d action on your character was well done when shooting of the card. Though after that the whole card throwing changed up. You had him hold the card with both arms connected like this:

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and he continues to hold that pose a bit. I think if you were to have continued using just one hand it would of been neat and less tacking with the just the arms pinned together in the same way. Also You could of thrown some 3d in with the far out shot too with the whole car being thrown with the hand.

Of course there's the classic negative view of the kill shot...but it would of been better if you had just continued on showed metro guy slumping down as well a blood dissipating.

all together your art style presented in the animation is supurb and quite nice to see. I think if you would expand into more detail flow as in continuing the blood and the death reaction of metro you'd have a solid chance at veteran but med-inter would suffice. keep up the work.

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Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: Behemoth vs Phazon
Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 4:20 am

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Not bad Behemoth. Truly very well done and had a nice flow going on. The action was well portrayed as well the nice holographic shine of the car spinning.The running was well played and the 3d action on your character was well done when shooting of the card. Though after that the whole card throwing changed up. You had him hold the card with both arms connected like this:

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and he continues to hold that pose a bit. I think if you were to have continued using just one hand it would of been neat and less tacking with the just the arms pinned together in the same way. Also You could of thrown some 3d in with the far out shot too with the whole car being thrown with the hand.

Of course there's the classic negative view of the kill shot...but it would of been better if you had just continued on showed metro guy slumping down as well a blood dissipating.

all together your art style presented in the animation is supurb and quite nice to see. I think if you would expand into more detail flow as in continuing the blood and the death reaction of metro you'd have a solid chance at veteran but med-inter would suffice. keep up the work.

curtz?

Wow, thanks for the CC man :D
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Behemoth
Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: NEW SHIT
Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2012 9:35 pm

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UPDATE AFTER SEVERAL MONTHS YAY!

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RHG BATTLE: Sickle Cell VS Cole (Enemy using flash, me using pivot).
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PBA/RHG Demo
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Failed practice.
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Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: NEW SHIT
Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2012 9:37 pm

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Dang man. I love your animations so much. Your newest anim looks
so good so far, and I love the RHG you did against that guy. Please get
veteran soon man :)
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Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: NEW SHIT
Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:59 pm

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Wow man, you have to finish that that was great. The hand movements were really well done, the smoke effect was beautiful, perspectives made it look so much better too. It looked really well done (thumbsup)

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Post subject: Re: Behemoth's thread: NEW SHIT
Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:42 pm

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Ooh. I like how the movements in your animations show a bit of character and well, liveliness. (especially in your failed practice)

I wish I'd see more action in your animations though, less of cinematic scenes and more of movements and fun and all. Animate things from different perspective I guess. Some parts of your animations look flat and all, and if it isn't flat, the scene is static. Just some advice.
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