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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:43 pm

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Yup, you're ready for intermediates in my opinion as well. (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:01 pm

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My opinion is that you're getting close to Intermediate as well, but I don't really think you're quite there yet.
High-Beginner is for you, and you are entirely aware of that, but you need to work on your poses, even though they're as good as they are.
I'm sorry, not Intermediate in my eyes. Simplicity is good sometimes, but y'see, you need to work with different bases, styles, to see which one fits you best.

As I said, High-Beginner.
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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 2:11 pm

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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 2:24 pm

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On the newest one with the yellow dude, the movements were really good until the run. The run lacked flow. Work on that and inter for you!

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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 3:09 am

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Woah, that was really flowy and it had great effects! Best DBZ animation I've ever seen! (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:31 am

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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:03 am

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Damn dude, the animation was great, the only issue I had was the part where the guy gets stabbed in the head, it's a oddly spaced, but this is intermediate quality. Your one of my favorite beginner animators now.
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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 5:12 am

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Looks Low Intermediate to me. (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 9:37 pm

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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 4:17 am

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Ask one of the rank team to move up.
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Post subject: Re: [Thread]Chocolate Kira/Senzo~
Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 6:12 pm

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Your animations seems pretty much fine to me, some parts at the 'end' of one movement you could flow a bit more because they seems a bit stiff, the best part to show what I'm talking about is when the blue does the body slam, look his arm, it may sound like waste of time because is just a 'arm' movement but is way better watch an animation that doesn't have some lacks of easing when is simple fix.

The combos are powerful and the spacing is consistent what is impressive, but you should try do it more entertaining doing the stick receive the damage, I mean, like when the blue received that knee in the face, would be nice see the blue walking few steps back while recovering his stability you know?
You have the basics spot on and imo you're low inter and this is why I requested a move up.
Keep it up (thumbsup)
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Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 11:57 pm

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Very good. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:07 am

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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:07 am

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Congrats mate (thumbsup) (thumbsup)
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Posted: Sun Jan 29, 2012 9:10 am

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How did I not know you before? You rock, well deserved, congrats man!
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