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Post subject: Rustbreaker ;3
Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 5:09 pm

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Tribute to Chris a.k.a blademaster

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Credits: Valtus/Eclipse & Blademaster<3

Unfinished blademaster tribute <3

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Post subject: Re: Flip and hammer
Posted: Fri May 18, 2012 5:18 pm

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Oh my god your pretty damn smooth with your animations and on the hammer animation there is a bit more power needed in my opinion. Pretty positive High Beg+ because the flip looks odd to me.
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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 6:44 am

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so... ya
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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:40 am

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Dude your amazing! Please make more, I simply adore your work. (:
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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:34 am

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I'd say intermediate, some very nice poses and a good grasp on physics and smooth movements.

The 2nd stick on your latest after he boosts the guy into a flip could use a little more easing on the arms as they go down, maybe even end in a relaxed position, they are kind of just sitting slightly flexed at the elbow and stop a little abruptly. More easing could of been used as the back leg moves toward the front on the final pose, I also noticed slight shaking on the 2nd sticks back leg as the other stick is running toward him, but these are very minor errors

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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:56 am


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O fuck the backflip was gorgeous.
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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 10:11 am

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The animation was sexy however, the stickman on the right stopped, almost instantly.
Y U BEE LAZY?

Anyway, I don't spot many flaws with the stickman on the left. My only concern is his legs and back. I thought he would of bent his legs and arched his back more to look as though he is gaining more power. (If that even makes sence) Maybe, I'm just being picky.

Keep it up mane! (thumbsup)
I'm looking foward to seeing more animations from you.
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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 10:17 am

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The backflip was very well animated, looked really nice. The only thing I can mention you could do better was the power of the "helping" stick. It looked like he didn't push at all. I think that could be fixed by making him straighten his arms so it looks like he's actually pushing the other stick in the air.
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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 12:36 pm

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The backflip was pretty damn awesome and just like Cavolia said the other stick needed more power and you should animate him better to simply balance the animation.
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Post subject: Re: *new* Backflip
Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 2:05 pm

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Pretty good but the second guy stops too suddenly
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Post subject: Re: *new* darkbert
Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:50 am

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Post subject: Re: *new* darkbert
Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:55 am

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Post subject: Re: 4 Hit combo! CC please <3
Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 1:20 pm

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new 4 hit comboob
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Post subject: Re: 4 Hit combo! CC please <3
Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:28 am

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Shapka wrote:Hi there
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Oh. My. God. I am in love with this animation. I love the effects and the movements man! It really proves that you have a grasp of the basics and understand flow very well! I'd like to joint with you maybe?

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Post subject: Re: Unfinished Blademaster tribute! CC please <3
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 7:05 am

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I hope u see this Chris
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