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Mr. Wallace's Rank?

-: 4; 17%

Low Intermediate: 7; 29%

Medium Intermediate: 9; 38%

High Intermediate: 4; 17%

+: 0; No votes

: Total votes : 24

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thepivotstudent

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 17/06/2012 And thread fix :)

Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 3:24 pm

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These are honestly quite amazing dude. Your previous animations really got the best of me. especially the third one in there. I'd say you belong in intermediates. And i'm sorry about not completing our sigwar, if you want we could remake something from it?

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Understick

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 17/06/2012 And thread fix :)

Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 7:31 pm

Red Wine

Joined: Sun Aug 28, 2011 7:01 pm
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Location: Türkiye-Edirne

Your animations really good man, make some longer thing with good storyline you will get intermediate after BBODDC

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Mr. Wallace

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 3:14 pm

DD Warrior

Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:42 pm
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Location: Devon, England.

pretty massive update guys, CC would make you smexy :3

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Understick

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 3:46 pm

Red Wine

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Too close to inter. (thumbsup)

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The Erif

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 4:08 pm

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disturbedobsessor wrote:
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scool)
from now on, I will make all of my posts in the center :P
maybe
Well, you're getting interz soon!
and as Understick said, you'll get it after the BBODDC.
Keep up the good work, you need to make something longer :P

Last edited by The Erif on Wed Jul 18, 2012 5:40 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Mr. Wallace

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 5:25 pm

DD Warrior

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Location: Devon, England.

Thanks guys, any more?

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Girbot

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 6:34 pm

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Pretty great bro. The roll at the end looked weird though.

Great too. Only thing is that when he should've hit the wall, he should've
pushed into the wall.

Your pretty close to intermediate. Try making something long ;D

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Daniël wrote:I must admit, I've never expected you to be a cat, but it kind of makes sense now.

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.Lethal

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 7:12 pm

Ultimate Pwner

Joined: Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:02 pm
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disturbedobsessor wrote:

This animation was awesome! I like your run alot, and the vault was very well executed. The only problem I seen was the fact that when he cat leaped to the ledge all of his inertia vanished. He simply landed on it, with that speed he would most likely bounce alittle. If you extended this I myself believe you could get interz. Just add like 5-10 more obstacles, and do your best on movement. But that is just my opinion.

I will be watching you. c:

Mr. Wallace

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 7:16 pm

DD Warrior

Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:42 pm
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everyone who's commented so far:

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nah, thanks guys :3

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Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 6:54 pm

Big Boss

Joined: Sat Sep 15, 2007 12:43 am
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Location: Florida

You're doing pretty good man, I'd just say to work on showing more of the weight and to fiddle around with the spacing. The poses could be better, but I'm not complaining, you're doing fine. I hope to see you in intermediates some day :)

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Pumpkin

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 9:10 pm

New Comer

Joined: Thu Jul 19, 2012 5:07 pm
Posts: 9

Hmm this anim parkour reminds me a lot this:

Tribute to Gradus?
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Ini-med-high.

not take long for inter,only train harder and longer is inter.

Mr. Wallace

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:07 am

DD Warrior

Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:42 pm
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Location: Devon, England.

Pumpkin wrote:Hmm this anim parkour reminds me a lot this:

Tribute to Gradus?
---

Ini-med-high.

not take long for inter,only train harder and longer is inter.

Thanks man, and yeah it was a tribute to gradus :), i'll edit the title ;)

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Eaglium

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 11:40 am

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Joined: Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:41 pm
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Location: Kyoto, Japan

That tribute to Gradus is really awesome, but yeah he does need to push the wall a little more at the end. Most of your animations look inter to me, and you don't seem to be struggling on any particular thing so that's good. I think you just need to work on small stuff like spacing.

Also I love this one for some reason.

Courtesy?

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Caleb

Post subject: Re: Will: Update: 18/07/2012

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:06 pm

Vacuum Cleaners

Joined: Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:13 pm
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I voted close, but no cigar. You also still need the monocle to be intsirmediate...

Seriously though, you're pretty good. Like your knowledge on perspective on the parkour one. On the flips one it seemed like the flips were too low though, and in the parkour one you make a mistake everybody seems to make, which is never going over the object. He goes through it...

For the rest you're great, just needs a little push in perhaps poses and simple spacing stuff and you're there. G'luck animating mate!