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Takeshi
Post subject: Ian F.'s Animations
Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 3:18 am

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Post subject: Re: Ian F.'s Animations
Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 10:51 pm

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definately good and flowing , and great job on the ice. to tell the truth i think i saw hardly any stiffness. i'd say borderline but probably even interz.
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:31 am

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very good, no stiffness and good easing- I think you are low inters,keep it up!
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 12:05 pm

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Your newest is pretty fine, althought humans cant run like that. The body didnt move at all, and it seems you were lazy. The reaction in the air was pretty off, because it didnt look so powerful, it looked just like a "push".

The runnings leg movements were still pretty good, and the jump was qutie nice. Good job on that.

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Post subject: Re: Ian F.'s Animations
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 12:08 pm

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Hey man Your fail at full bodys not that bad I think its just the blood you really need to work on and yoour ice combo is good as well should make them hit someone or something like that anyway keep up the good work

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Post subject: Re: Ian F.'s Animations
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 2:38 pm

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There's a couple of things you need to work on

In the animation, the run was very stiff, the back didn't even move, you might want to fix that. Just edit the frames and it should work out. Also, remember onion skin trailing - That means bending the parts towards where they previously were.

You might to work on easing, you do ease, but it could be better.

I think you did it OK though
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 1:09 am

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Okay, so I see a lot of complaints about the stiffness of the back, and I'm trying to fix it.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 3:03 am

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Your "combo" is not a "combo." It is not even a "half combo".......It is just a punch...

Overall good movements but the reactions were bad.
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