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Intermediate?

No
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Maybe
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47%
Yes
8
47%
 
Total votes : 17
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Brook
Post subject: Severe Has Quit
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 5:18 am

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Welcome to my brand new thread as some of oyu know i quit for about 2 months but now i'm back and i will be animating as much as i can.

People i suport.

Lerky - Awesome animator good friend.
Davo - Deserves intermediate and is a good friend at times :).
Watty94 - Good friend and deserves intermediate.

Work shop

Previews:

NEW!
Thingy edit
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Pivot: http://agupload.animationgrounds.org/fi ... 02cd12.piv

Cliff
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Pivot: http://agupload.animationgrounds.org/fi ... 3b3ae0.piv

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Some random thing lol
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Pivot: http://agupload.animationgrounds.org/fi ... 0c39ec.piv
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Hover edited.
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Pivot: http://agupload.animationgrounds.org/fi ... ddde52.piv

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Exaggeration.
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The reaction and something else is a bit screwed up by gif and sizing heres the piv
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Hover
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Pivot: http://agupload.animationgrounds.org/fi ... accc14.piv (if you have pivot 3 view it the gif is shit.)


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Testing choaz's stick... i don't like the landing but i thought the rest is good.
http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... tints9.gif
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Color Fight Collab Animation :D

http://img291.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... labnc6.gif.

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Older
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Beam and kick test test thing... mainly focusing on the beam. gif rape ):
http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... labgr9.gif
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Joint with Davo and Wattsy.
http://img146.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ndipz7.gif
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Flippzor
http://img112.imageshack.us/my.php?image=flipip6.gif

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Some awesome beam thing.
Double framed:
http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?image=beammd2.gif
Normal:
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Robot.
http://img207.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... diton0.gif
Last edited by Brook on Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:55 am, edited 24 times in total.
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TAPS
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 6:02 am

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NEW ANI =
totaly inter ..
u need to be moved now
I think ur ready !
love the ani BTW
ADMIN MOVE HIM NOW
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Brook
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 6:06 am

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Thanks you very much Taps, i will give you curtesy when you post a new anim.
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TraceColour
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:13 am

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The main problem I saw was that when he was doing the close up walk, the arms were shaky and didn't look like they were fixed to the shoulder joints. Maybe when the bullet shot it could have slowly moved up and down instead of staying in a straight line, they're the only bad things I could spot besides a bit of stiffness in the arms. I loved the gun in it though, the movements were orgasmic. Try and add some trails off the bullet and maybe a bit off transparency behind the gun when it is shot, that's all :) Very nice though.
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Brook
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 8:53 am

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Heres your bullet movement davo, also added another effect in.
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Blue Phoenix
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:43 am

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Ok, how is everyone better than me??

Ah, oh well.
The first one his arm seemed a bit stiff in some parts, but overall the animation looked very nice.
Gtfo Begginer's Hall.

Move him.

Courtesy plz, sir?
Brook
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 3:45 am

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Thanks for the suport everyone courtesy coming your way blue.
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Alcyone
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 6:53 am

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hai. That sucks. Gtfo.

Lol, it was good, but i'm sure i commented on it. >_> It was floppy, which i don't like, you'll need to change that style when you're in inter hall. Yeah, as everyone says, the back arm is stiff, and when he shoot the gun.... ITs' off, but i can't put my finger on it.

This space bar key isn't working good.C:

Courtsey? You knowwhere my thread is ._.
Brook
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:18 am

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Lolman >:) wrote:hai. That sucks. Gtfo.

Lol, it was good, but i'm sure i commented on it. >_> It was floppy, which i don't like, you'll need to change that style when you're in inter hall. Yeah, as everyone says, the back arm is stiff, and when he shoot the gun.... ITs' off, but i can't put my finger on it.

This space bar key isn't working good.C:

Courtsey? You knowwhere my thread is ._.


I have no idea where you thread is ._. thanks for the tips i'm making an interz attempt after i have done the uploading.
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Floe
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:54 am


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Your newest was spec-fricken-tacular.

Blood:
Fair, not much particles, but its better than the blood splattering on the wall.

Gunshot:
Great, I loved how he cocked the gun back, and the shot itself was very good. Smoke might make it better, no?

Bullet:
Awesome effects on the bullet flying, not much else to say.

All other movements:
Very good run, the walk was too, but it was a little shaky. Nice punch, and kick. I think you did an excellent job on the stickman standing, about to get shot. He was wobbly, realistically standing there, and that was very good. I also liked how when he was running you made a mask-type stick to see through the killer's eyes.

Effects: 8/10
Stiffness: 7/?
Easing: 7/10
Shakiness: 8/10
Creativity: 10/10

Overall: 8/10

Borderline.
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Brook
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:05 am

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Thanks for the comment brawly i will keep that in mind.
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PivAd123
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:27 am

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Wow..

those stick figures are sick!

now for commenting

on your newest animation.. you have no problem on stiffness.. sweet stick figure and the blood is kind of good.. i cant make anything better than that!

well its nice for your rank..

BORDER INTERS

PS I made a short comment cuz u only have 1 animation..

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Brook
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead - I'ma back
Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 7:20 am

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Update
Sniper preview,
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TraceColour
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead -Update (I return courtesy)
Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 7:29 am

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It looks good how the characters are always moving, but I think you move them too much, the look like they have add and can't sit still. lol. Not stiff at all, smooth, No terrible movements. Maybe you could have put the bullet behind the box where the sniper is sitting so that it looked more like a video screen. It kinda just looks like a window and someone else shoots who is off screen. And a sniper would be trying to sit as still as possible, right? So he probably wouldn't be moving that much. Looked great though, keep it up :D
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Brook
Post subject: Re: Risen from the dead -Update (I return courtesy)
Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2008 8:05 am

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I will fix up the arms a bit thanks davo and whos the noob who ranked me high beginer >_> .
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