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favourite animation?

Thirsty Motivation
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45%
Bar Fight
6
30%
Vagic Joint 3
3
15%
3d angle tumbling
2
10%
 
Total votes : 20
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S†yleR
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:03 pm

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The one with the text, really like the scrolling cam, it should be longer or a 2/3 parter.
In the second one... i really thought that she would have sex with him... THAT BITCH :'(
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My thread : http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=59&t=63517
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Post subject: Re: Wray's thread :D
Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:38 pm

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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:29 pm

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good animation, but to improve train and never forget the Easing of fuses all parts of the stk, good luck

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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:17 am

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I remember when you where a noob, now I looked at your thread and im just like whoa!

Man youve improved so much since last time, The one thing I see wrong in the second one the movements are a bit bad, Your strong points are running, and flips.
The newest one its real good, but you need to work on your reactions, and physics, you look like a borderline at some pints and then in others not so much High begginer.


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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:02 am

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for your newest when the person repeled down into the building the rope should have kept moving and the gunshot wasn't very good but overall it was smooth and not very choppy just eliminate stiffness and add blood
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Post subject: Re: Wray's thread :D
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:04 pm

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hey you id say your a begeinner not that good
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Post subject: Re: Wray's thread :D
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:11 pm

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hey dude thanks for commenting on mah thread.
overall most of your animations are rly awesome. You ease them well and there is very little stiffness. The newest one (of the sniper) is borderz, or maybe high-beginner. A lot of it is good. I dont like the gunshot, and when he shoots, his legs are stiff i think. You might also add blood when he snipes. The roll when he is jumping on the roofs is really sexy, good job on that. Also, staffzor has some stiffness when he jumps i think.
i rated you borderz. keep it up youre really good :)
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Post subject: Re: Wray's thread :D
Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:24 pm

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iluvyou07 wrote:hey you id say your a begeinner not that good


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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 6:38 pm

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I like your animations story, the only problems I see is stiffness and fidgets but no it isnt bad at all, all you need to do is improve on the basics.
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 7:41 pm

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See my new anim up top :D
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Post subject: Re: Wray's thread :D
Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 1:23 am

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Hey. Pretty good anims you got there. All seem very creative. I see a few problems though. Try working on stiffness and shakiness. Obviously stiffness is when you only move like 1-2 joints in a frame. From now on, move EVERY joint, in EVERY frame. And then shakiness. Sometime I see like the arm of the stickfigure randomly twitches. That's easy to fix. SoI won't explain.
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 2:12 am

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Ok, Nice work. But not Inter yet.

The ways your sticks move are very strange. They seem very stiff and moving everywhere and not very, good. The arms and legs are quite shakey. And when their arms are moving to punch, it's choppy, stuff like that.
Now I'll start to comment on those animations.

One with the hero:
It has good words, very well spelled out and understanding. The foot placement was off. It went, not right. They won't stay in place, they move around when they're supposed to be in the same place until you MUST move them. When the guy slides down on the rope, he wibbles on wobbles.
And when he lands, his feet placement of off, and when he shot, only his body(Backbone) Moved when every thing is supposed to move. And the gun shot was terrible. Not good at all. Ok, the run start, didn't start off very well. He started off too fast. When he jumps, he doesn't look ready for it, he's not down enough to get ready for the jump. Everything in that scene were very stiff. Every part of his body was very stiff indeed.

Overall: Med-low begginer.


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Alcyone
Post subject: Re: Wray's thread :D
Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:14 am

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I can only see the two flips, lol.

First flip:

It was cool. Just the physics were wrong. He stayed in the air too long, and when he ran he stayed in the air a tad too long (and the run was slow).

Flip 2:

It was shaky, the physics were better than the first, but still quite bad. There was shakiness when he was in the air, I know that's quite hard to fix, but try. It's easy if you practice.When he landed his foot was shaky, too.

Lol not much to comment on, but it's still a comment, right?
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Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:46 pm

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I say med inters.
Your'e easing is a little all over the place. Your blood effects are fine, but you have some stiffness in there, and I can still see some choppiness.
If you can work that stff out a BIT more, you'll be high begs.
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Post subject: Re: Wray's thread :D
Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:49 pm

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mmmmed... iiiinterz...
wow, can we get a mod or helper in here?
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