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Poll ended at Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:43 pm

Med Beg [wtf]
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High Beg [:)]
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Boarderz [:D]
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35%
Low Interz [:0]
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PivotLiam
Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Jon/Sharpshooter Tribute! :D
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:07 pm

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JON/SHARPSHOOTER TRIBUTE JUST UPLOADED!!!

PLEASE WATCH IT :3

(hopefully borders, or higher :3)
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Jon/Sharpshooter Tribute! :D
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:07 pm

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UPDATE: SMOOTH RUN, :D I LIKES IT, CHECK IT OUT.
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:58 pm

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Pretty good but still a little choppy, possibly ease more after the steps..I animate my runs like |------|---|--|-|-|-|--|--|-----|-----|----------| it works well it has a fast step with nice easing after it.
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:14 pm

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nice man, not sure on the rank tho, id say med-high beg?
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2009 8:23 pm

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I think your at least high begginer, but I can't quite put my finger on why you don't seem inter. You have all the basics down; easing, movements, camera effects, but I would suggest trying effects and using less easing, because your anims are slightly overeased IMO.

As for you newest animation, I don't really like it. It was eased well and movements were good, I just thought his posture was weird because of how far out his arms and legs went.
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:48 am

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Hello, dude.
I watched ur animations and now i think that you are a high beginner.
In jon\sharp tribute physics were off. its your main problem.
Movements was smooth, easing was good too i think.
But the physics... Looks unrealistic.
I like your run loop - it is smooth.
Work on physics, improve yourslef.
keep animating. Good luck.
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 4:06 am

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The jon/sharp tribute.

It seemed like an almost total rip off. You used sharps sticks AND did an almost frame by frame rip of what he did.

Other then that, stiff, and less easing please.

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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 2:16 pm

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Noobgai wrote:The jon/sharp tribute.

It seemed like an almost total rip off. You used sharps sticks AND did an almost frame by frame rip of what he did.

Other then that, stiff, and less easing please.

Courtesy? if you want.


I know, I wanted to make a tribute, i gave credz to sharpshooter, i watched sharps version, and I really liked some of his parts, but I did a lot of my own stuff, so dont say its a rip off when i blatently called it a 'tribute'. But thanks for the CC i guess..
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 6:05 pm

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UPDATE!!

REALLY BAD EPICLY FAILED RUN THAT I TRIED.

But still, its an update nonetheless.
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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:31 am

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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 5:44 am

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Pretty good,the Jon/Sharp tribute was cool,it was really smooth,but the physic when the samurai guy jump off the roof were off,he just went straight down.The blood could of been better.It was just a little too slow.

The runs are alright,just a bit choppy,keep it up though.

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Post subject: Re: PivotLiam's Thread- UPDATE! Smooth Run!! <<<<CLICK HERE
Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 1:19 pm

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UPDATE

Skate Joint with DARKIDRIS

Not my newest animation, but i think it went quite well.

Check it out! :D
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Post subject: Re: |- PL's Thread - New anis, Backflip test and Smooth fall -|
Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 8:24 pm

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UPDATE

Backflip test and smooth fall.

please tell me what you think and rank, CC please :D
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Post subject: Re: |- PL's Thread - New anis, Backflip test and Smooth fall -|
Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 8:35 pm

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hey Liamz,
I love that backflip.
Very well spaced :D
master both heavy spacing and easing -> Make a long (storylined)animation,
and you're interz like that.

I already gave you CC about the other one on MSN ;)

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Post subject: Re: |- PL's Thread - New anis, Backflip test and Smooth fall -|
Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 9:30 pm

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This was really good. Although on the Jon and Sharp Tribute. your Sanada stick was too smooth and too eased. It was running so fast, but the legs weren't moving at that pace. It's like moving really fast, but you don't move your feet that fast. Get the idea? Anyway, really good! Bet you'll make inters in no time. Boarders for you.
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