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Post subject: Kroyo: 03/25/12:Rust Breaker 2
Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 8:28 pm

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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 10:05 am

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Quite choppy, stiff but interesting.
work on them and look at some tutorials

Nice effects on the first one =)
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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations
Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:36 am

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Very stiff and uneased. I suggest baha's tut in the tutorial section. Work on easing and stiffness and make more tests. U have nice Bacgrounds
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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations
Posted: Sun May 24, 2009 2:54 am

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Your anims are really choppy uneased and the footplacement needs some work. Remember to keep your sticks moving to so its more realistic. I suggest that you make a couple anims without backrounds so you can practice with the onion skin.

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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations
Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 10:30 pm

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Got some new animations up, comment, rate plz!!


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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations
Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 10:47 pm

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u need to stop with the affects, and just work on the basics
running, walking, punching, and whatever else u do
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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations
Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 2:19 am

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LilyoAnimations wrote:u need to stop with the affects, and just work on the basics
running, walking, punching, and whatever else u do


never punched in my animations and I barely walk or run in my animation, I'm working on the effects.

Side not:the D-Day crap was a failed thing I lost ideas for.


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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations
Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 2:25 am

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crazyjoe1090 wrote:
LilyoAnimations wrote:u need to stop with the affects, and just work on the basics
running, walking, punching, and whatever else u do


never punched in my animations and I barely walk or run in my animation, I'm working on the effects.

Side not:the D-Day crap was a failed thing I lost ideas for.


u can't just work on affects, if u dont have your basic movements down, which i can see you don't.. trust me. Most begginers just want cool affects but they can't even make teh stick man move or run
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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations-need some critiques on run and combo hit
Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 1:32 pm

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New test animations, trying to make my own run, but i can't get the groove of it, hit combo, is something it threw together.


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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations-need some critiques on run and combo hit
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 1:16 am

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youve got the ideas
but just simple stuff you need to work on
take a look at some of the tuts and take your time
like some of the effects though
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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations-need some critiques on run and combo hit
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:56 am

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They're fairly origional ideas but you need to work on the stiffness. The run also needs to move further forward as the back leg picks up, otherwise it looks like it's sliding backwards.
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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations-need some critiques on run and combo hit
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2009 12:16 pm

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Zed wrote:They're fairly origional ideas but you need to work on the stiffness. The run also needs to move further forward as the back leg picks up, otherwise it looks like it's sliding backwards.


ok, thanks I'll work on that and update it soon.


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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations-need some critiques on run and combo hit
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2009 11:44 pm

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Tutorials for sure, whats wrong is there choppy, and uneased, the effects are pretty good but to be Frank i know you could do better everyone could be great you just need to put effort and time into your pivots.
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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations-need some critiques on run and combo hit
Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:32 pm

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New Animation, it might be a series, IDK, suggest anything I should do.


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Post subject: Re: Crzy's Animations-need some critiques on run and combo hit
Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:04 pm

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Ur improving quite fast. But choppiness is ur maing problem. Try to ease more. Make more tests, add effects and ull become very good. Also look out for stiffness. I think ur close to med beg :)
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