Banez Animations

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Hollywood
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Update gun draw, ill continue it dont worry.
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Post subject: Re: Banes New And Improved Thread.

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You have some pretty good stuff here. Most of it is smooth, and your sticks aren't very stiff. With that said, I think that you just need to relax in your animating a bit. Things look a little too "Textbook" As in all of the backflips look the same, and all of the spins look the same. Mix it up a little.

Speaking of Backflips, the late rotation happens too quickly, It looks like he hits the ground with his back but he's magically on his feet. I like the thought, just rotate him a little sooner in his jump.

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Nice
Your really improving on smoothness and foot placement it's juust a little bit stop and go
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Hollywood
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ive never played that, and thanks for the comments guys.
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On the front arm of the gun thing, there is alot of shkiness near the end of it, still, all you need to do is fix your Footpalcement. on the backflip, he stays in the air for FAR TOO long, he would have fell down and cracked his skull, which would look really good IMO. Meh im lazy i know, i will edit this post later but for now, Courtsey?
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Hollywood
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okay, and the shakeyness, was supposed to be him loading the gun, but thats fine.

thanks for the comment ill return courtesies.
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Hollywood
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update messing around, ill edit it up.

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I hope that last part was missing the effect of gun fire, because the barrel shot up in the air and then back down leveled off.


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Hollywood
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he hasnt shot yet.
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Hollywood
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another update guys.

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hey bane, that newest of you started pretty well, the running was incredible and had a great momentum and flow, but it got pretty shitty on the gap he did, that was incredibly off.
I suggest you= stop with that shakyness you have, move all joints per frame, make a longer animation too.
that's all.
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Hollywood
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Thanks man, so your saying i should fix how far he jumped? I can fix that.
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.SLide wrote:Courtesy?

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yeah, fix that, too out of physics
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Sweet animations dude, smooth and very well eased. All I have got to say is, start putting colour and background in, and start finishing animations. Alot were unfinished :(. Concentrate on easing and natural looking movements and youll be interz in no time.
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Hollywood
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okay, guess I have two courtesys to return.
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