Update gun draw, ill continue it dont worry.
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Joined: Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:12 am
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You have some pretty good stuff here. Most of it is smooth, and your sticks aren't very stiff. With that said, I think that you just need to relax in your animating a bit. Things look a little too "Textbook" As in all of the backflips look the same, and all of the spins look the same. Mix it up a little.
Speaking of Backflips, the late rotation happens too quickly, It looks like he hits the ground with his back but he's magically on his feet. I like the thought, just rotate him a little sooner in his jump.
Courtesy?
Speaking of Backflips, the late rotation happens too quickly, It looks like he hits the ground with his back but he's magically on his feet. I like the thought, just rotate him a little sooner in his jump.
Courtesy?
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Joined: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:33 pm
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Nice
Your really improving on smoothness and foot placement it's juust a little bit stop and go
Off-topic: I feel like I played you in Archanists
Your really improving on smoothness and foot placement it's juust a little bit stop and go
Off-topic: I feel like I played you in Archanists
DD Knight
Joined: Sat May 02, 2009 8:03 am
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On the front arm of the gun thing, there is alot of shkiness near the end of it, still, all you need to do is fix your Footpalcement. on the backflip, he stays in the air for FAR TOO long, he would have fell down and cracked his skull, which would look really good IMO. Meh im lazy i know, i will edit this post later but for now, Courtsey?
Badass Statham
Joined: Sun Apr 05, 2009 6:08 pm
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Location: Bear, DE,USA
I hope that last part was missing the effect of gun fire, because the barrel shot up in the air and then back down leveled off.
*You must be prepared for harsh critique. What I offer is in sight on what you should of done and you may get a offended, but you must understand if you can't take the heat get out of the kitchen of art.
hey bane, that newest of you started pretty well, the running was incredible and had a great momentum and flow, but it got pretty shitty on the gap he did, that was incredibly off.
I suggest you= stop with that shakyness you have, move all joints per frame, make a longer animation too.
that's all.
Med/High beginner
Courtesy?
I suggest you= stop with that shakyness you have, move all joints per frame, make a longer animation too.
that's all.
Med/High beginner
Courtesy?
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yeah, fix that, too out of physics
Junior
Joined: Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:25 am
Posts: 49
Location: Australia
Sweet animations dude, smooth and very well eased. All I have got to say is, start putting colour and background in, and start finishing animations. Alot were unfinished :(. Concentrate on easing and natural looking movements and youll be interz in no time.
Med high beginnr
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