JB614- Alien Activity

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Post subject: Re: 3 Hit COMBO (download)

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HAHA that miget one was awesome ! and the newest one was pretty cool too . You're definitely better than me so you should be intermediate if I'm beginner hahaa .
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in the 3 combo fight, when the blue guy runs toward the other guy, his back looks extremely stiff. i think u should fix that. overall, ur anims r really good. i would think ur low interz.

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hey there :)

i liked your 3 hit combo animation thing, the moves at the end were smooth. but the flip at the start looked a bit weird, his legs jerk a bit when he lands after it. also, when the blue guy ran, the way his arms moved was really spastic, and his legs were quite jerky. also, right at the end his body movesd down but his arm didn't.

the cool fighing moves look like they could be inters, but i think the other stuff will hold youu back. so i'd fix that if i were you :)

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the 3 hit combo was done pretty great. You can see how much effort you put in it. Go on with those movements. These are great :D!
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Post subject: Re: Stick Figure Fight (3 hit combo continued)

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Thanks for all the comments and tips everybody. Some of you said my movements were jerky, but I really can't find them in my anims or figure out how to fix them. neutral)
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Your 3 hit combo animation was wicked. Great movements, well eased, everything imo.
You really have improved a lot.

Well done.
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Thanks Valium. Lzylyl, I fixed that stiff back you mentioned. Thanks for the tip.
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Post subject: Re: JB614- Alien Activity

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Badass man. I find nothing wrong except for a few little mistakes in places. But you can figure them out.
I found the Alien Activity animation was waaaay to fast for me. Slow down the frame rate, or ease alot more.

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wohoow, this is awesome!! (thumbsup) (thumbsup)
The only mistake i found was the frame-rate, set the speed lower and you would be inter in my oppinion

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It's quite good.
I like the background. Yours?
I wanna see more of your stuff ;D
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Detail was amazing. I think that was intermediate level. Like everyone said, fix your frame rate, then it'll be alright.
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