I think that's a pretty nice start. I mean there's still a lot of improving that you need to do in order to get better, for example foot placement, try to keep the feet in the same exact spot they where. Also you should try to ease. Easing is when you move a movement like -I--I---I--I- < this rather than I-I-I-I-I < that. You'll get the hang of it :D. Keep it up.
Oh and btw I remember your old name, pivotmasta19 :D.