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Oliver

Post subject: Re: *New* 2 animations :D

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 5:54 am

I Love Inferion

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I was hoping to see you work on the joint...

Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: *New* 2 animations :D

Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 6:28 am

Official

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Olive oil wrote:I was hoping to see you work on the joint...

I still am. I'll be done soon.

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Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: *New* 2 animations :D

Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2012 7:00 pm

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people should comment right now....

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Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:29 am

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Update with dat failed ddc

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Oliver

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 4:14 pm

I Love Inferion

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Looks a bit stop n go, but I really liked it. (thumbsup)

Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 6:49 pm

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Thanks

Anymore comments?

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Sharpshooter

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:45 am

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Joined: Mon Oct 15, 2007 7:37 am
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Location: Queensland, Australia

You need to unrape that failed ddc gif..

Anyway, I see you tried adding a swish/blur speed effect thing as the BG/stickman moved which was really cool and looked great, you don't usually see beginners or intermediates animate blur effects like that anymore, so good job on that. Even though it's a bit gifraped the backgrounds looked pretty good, it looks really odd how there is no colour on the sky though, a nice sky-blue or sunset colour would of made the bg look heaps better. Nice movements but I thought the stickfigures upperbody was a bit stiff during the speed running scene. Try slightly moving the upperbody forward each frame and at an angle to make it look like the stick is trying to gain speed, that way at least you will be getting rid of that stiff, up-right look.

The rest of the animation was really nice, I'm sure you would of made it into the DDC if you continued with that quality. Anyway, high beginner. You're going at a nice pace so far, I don't think it will take you long before you reach intermediates (thumbsup)

courtesy returned

Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:54 am

Official

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Wow, that was actually really helpful and encouraging :D thanks man.

And I was thinking of adding a light blue background but I was kinda tired

(thumbsup)

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Nice Pants

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:06 pm

Big Boss

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Location: Florida

Your animations are pretty cool man. Your sticks seem a little static, especially with the back, so try to stick with the momentum you give them, and loosen up the way he moves, if you know what I mean. Hope to see something long from you and if you need further help just PM me.

Boots

Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:53 am

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Nice Pants wrote:Your animations are pretty cool man. Your sticks seem a little static, especially with the back, so try to stick with the momentum you give them, and loosen up the way he moves, if you know what I mean. Hope to see something long from you and if you need further help just PM me.

Thanks a lot and yeah I really need to fix that back :P

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puppy

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 7:00 am

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MMmmmm.., The Fkick, was cool, but it was pretty short, i notice a few flaws that you need to work more on, such as the spin itself, and the reaction, if you want to continue it to a combo, but all in all cool.

And your "Failed DDC"
Well you can call it that if you want, "But in reality, it's just bringing you down", well i like the running, in the first part, really awesome.

Anyways Courtesy? Cuz i would like some Cnc too! :)

http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=88040&p=1614277#p1614277
My thread: Gimme courtz! show some love. (;

Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: Failed ddc

Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 1:33 am

Official

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puppy wrote:MMmmmm.., The Fkick, was cool, but it was pretty short, i notice a few flaws that you need to work more on, such as the spin itself, and the reaction, if you want to continue it to a combo, but all in all cool.

And your "Failed DDC"
Well you can call it that if you want, "But in reality, it's just bringing you down", well i like the running, in the first part, really awesome.

Anyways Courtesy? Cuz i would like some Cnc too! :)

I made the fkick like 5 months ago... It was one of my comeback animations from 2 years of rust...
as I said on my first page, i still might continue it but im not sure atm because I have other things to do so thats not really "Bringing me down" and I would appreciate it if you diddnt put words in my mouth.
So no courtz for you.

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