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Post subject: Raymond's Thread - Acrobatics 5

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 1:24 am

Fresh Start

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Newest at the top.

Acrobatics 5

City Parkour (Finished)

Telekinesis

Support Flip

Lightsaber

Transformation Loop

Stupid Ledges

Punching Bag

Acrobatics 4

Lithium Vs Demon
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Climber
^Nice Pants Tribute^
(Scroll Down)

Sandwich

Acrobatics 3

Stupid Rocks

Infiltration Fail

Joint with Kellawgs

Palm Flip

Acrobatics 2

Random Fight

Stone Skipping

FFA Round 1

Acrobatics

Fight Loop

Roof Jump

More will come later.

Last edited by Raymond on Tue Apr 23, 2013 5:49 am, edited 66 times in total.

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Yogurt

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 1:36 am

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This actually looks like a fun idea! I might actually try making a thread in Beginners too.
Anyways, animation looks good, you'll get intermediate back no problem (thumbsup)

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Oliver

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 2:07 am

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Oh dude what happened your no Beginner.

Kap'n Krunch

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:09 am

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Olive oil wrote:Oh dude what happened your no Beginner.

Look at his thread....

Anyway, looked really good! Your intermediate in no time :D

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Kellawgs

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:08 am

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Awesome, man.

Fresh beginning! I wish you much luck man, (thumbsup)

Raymond

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:05 am

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Thanks everyone! I'll do my best to improve with each animation. I really need to work on my run spacing right now though.

Anyways, heres a roof jump i might continue.

http://yourimg.in/m/h8z2w38.gif

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Gradus

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start #2

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 2:54 pm

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Shit I was giving you a good CC and the computer just turned off :/

This stick have huge legs, you'll have to do more tests to find the good pose to make it look right.
When you plan do the stick running without do he leaving the screen I think that is better you apply the proper spacing until he reach the middle of the screen and after that you move only some pixels to do not give a static lazy look, so you'll be able to give more focus in the poses and flow then the spacing at this moment. The back arm goes back just a little, you should move it more, because will look better and give a more speed feeling. The leg shouldn't have the knee so high I guess or is just the huge leg that give this look.

The roll was well done, nothing to add but I disliked that he stay in the same speed as before the roll, you should do him getting the speed lost while doing the roll.

Overall good job (thumbsup)

This actual run have the same problems that I mentioned upper but the back is more higher and it looks better imo, but still some details to redo. The first flip should have more flexed back and legs too, after that the animation goes fine and the stick fall sudden, you should make the events more clear for who is watching, he was going to do a movement and failed right? but you should give a reason of why he would fall like that while just running and trying do a new movement.

That's all for now man, I'm trying improve my run too and I'm getting there I think, so I'll post this recent animation from me with run that might help you. I did in this animation everything that I said to you in this comment.
http://yourimg.in/m/683g06p.piv
Good luck man (thumbsup)

Echo™

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start #2

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:09 pm

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i really like ur running style (thumbsup)

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Marvilicious

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:22 pm

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DemonKilo wrote:Thanks everyone! I'll do my best to improve with each animation. I really need to work on my run spacing right now though.

Anyways, heres a roof jump i might continue.

http://yourimg.in/m/h8z2w38.gif

Yeah, you should be Inter again in no time!

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Cavolia

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start #2

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:43 pm

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Except for the running I think the animations are pretty good. Try some other running as well to see what looks the best on you.

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Raymond

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start #2

Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:41 pm

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Thanks Inacio for the huge CC! When I get home from work today I'll definitely use your piv file to study some more and finish up that animation. (thumbsup)

Same goes to you Cavolia, thanks man. I'll work on some run styles.

Mr. Bombastic wrote:
DemonKilo wrote:Thanks everyone! I'll do my best to improve with each animation. I really need to work on my run spacing right now though.

Anyways, heres a roof jump i might continue.

http://yourimg.in/m/h8z2w38.gif
Yeah, you should be Inter again in no time!

:D Glad to hear it! I wana prove it to myself first though, i need to make a longer animation.

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Raymond

Post subject: Re: Fresh Start #2

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:16 am

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I've had pivot open all day and I've just been staring. I can't seem to continue this so if anyone wants to joint, have at it. Otherwise I'll just keep it as a roof jump.