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What rank am I

Med beginner: 3; 60%

med-high beginner: 1; 20%

high beginner: 0; No votes

borderline: 0; No votes

inter: 1; 20%

: Total votes : 5

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Soliderking

Post subject: I'M BACK after 3 years!/New Run Loop

Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 3:35 am

New Comer

Joined: Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:18 am
Posts: 19

Hi my name is Soliderking. I left Darkdemon 3 years ago. I came back to start over pivot and see how far I can get. Hopefully in the future I become inter. Well, I'll be posting animations so check me out. :))

Help me out by giving me constructive criticism. Thanks

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Courtesy?
http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=59&t=90640

UStickPanther

Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:38 pm

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Joined: Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:53 pm
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Location: Turkey/Kütahya/Tavşanlı

Great animations. You should work on Stiffness and Easing. I like your animations.

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JojoI3a

Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:44 pm

DieHard
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Joined: Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:47 pm
Posts: 204

jump
This one looked pretty smooth, but it looks like the character is floating trough all of the animation. You have some shakiness and stiffness problems, also you need to work on your easing. I didn't like the run and punch because the run is supposed to have a key frame, check this tut for a good run: http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=6288.The punch seemed totally powerless and really choppy.
Overall, I'd say you're low beginner, close to medium.

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Nukem

Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:58 pm

Juke
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Posts: 3660
Location: Ireland

Not bad man, the main problem I see that stands out a lot is the back is REALLY stiff. Move the joints more in the back dude. Also work on your flow, the movements seem to change a bit too quickly. Sorry for the terrible CC but I've just had a long day of exams (thumbsup)

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Neo

Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 9:06 pm

aka Asenine
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Joined: Sat Feb 11, 2012 7:40 am
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Location: England

wow 3 years? that's like starting completely fresh! Really good animations in which case.

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Awesomator

Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:03 am

Assassin

Joined: Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:14 pm
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OK first of all the run, in my opinion was too over eased and the arm needed to come behind the body before punching also move the back it looked like he was glued to a wall [in other words it was stiff].
The jump is definitely your best but the physics were a bit off and the jumps were too slow spaced and over eased nice back bends. Can you PM me the .piv? I also think he could of taken two strides before jumping.
Overall
Pretty good just work on those things sorry for the lengthy read.
Medium medium beginner.

Edit:he also pauses for too long when he lands but that's probably just me being picky .

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Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 11:46 am

dampw33d

Joined: Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:35 pm
Posts: 660

I remember you from when i started animating.
You were a big icon for me back then, lmfao.

Looking good, just do what ever you do. (Y)
And keep the fuck at it.

paraplegiC

Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:27 pm

logiC
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Joined: Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:50 pm
Posts: 4356

soliderking2 wrote:I think this is your rank
borderline-------------------l--inter

You have easing down, you just need to work on effects more and work on shakyness just a little(very little), try to make a longer animation and then you will become inters quick

courtesy

I am [P]hyzix, you commented on my thread THREE YEARS ago, i never returned our courtesy, here goes.
On the animation where he jumps off the wall onto the block, when he lands, he looks weightless because he doesnt bend is legs to absorb the impact, keep that in mind.
And on the punch one, try to move the origin slightly, and bend his back, he looked very stiff.
Courtesy returned :D

HMajik66

Post subject: Re: I'M BACK after 3 years!

Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:33 am

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Joined: Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:13 pm
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3 years being away huh? Welcome back i guess :D
Well, on your newest animation, all i can say is that the back is super stiff. Try imagining yourself running in real life. how your body leans in when running at a high speed. Fix the stiffness and challenge yourself. Then youll truly improve :)