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Post subject: Re: Benders!
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 7:18 pm

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Nice job on the new animation, the effects were very decent, and overall the movements were good aswell. I'd say try refining your spacing a little bit, maybe smooth it out some more, and your animations will look even better. I don't see any real problems with it, just don't get lazy on your movements, as they kind of declined it quality towards the end.

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Post subject: Re: Benders!
Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 1:00 pm

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Post subject: Re: Blood :O
Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 9:16 pm

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Man that was sick! Your actually one of my favourite beginners, you got a powerful style and you animate fun ideas.

As for things that could be improved: First off I have to say the blood was actually really well done, I would say maybe add a bit more particles that fly into the air on the first slash and then drop down or disappear, make them travel in the direction of sword as it makes contact with arm (I am not saying make the particles fly in the sword swinging arc, just in a straight line from the direction the cut was made, so maybe up and a bit to the right). The walking at the end was pretty slack, it all got a bit abrupt and rough looking. I liked the reaction, except for the torso as it was cut off, it maybe went a bit further to the right than it should have.

Overall I'm really impressed, just something about your style that I love. Keep making more, and smooth those movements out and you'll be golden (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: Blood :O
Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:49 pm

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LoL Rez, again you give me motivating :)
Thanks brah :)
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Post subject: Re: Blood :O
Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 7:03 am

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Wow man, you are really good, extremely close to Intermediates in my opinion. The only thing holding you back, on your newest that is, in my opinion is that you make the walking with his legs too heavy and a little too fast, aside from that keep it up, let me know when you post another animation.

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Post subject: Re: Blood :O
Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 12:14 pm

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Going for a holiday...be back in a week :)
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Post subject: Re: Blood :O
Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:19 pm

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The blood was done great I really liked it. You pulled off the power well on the sword attacks. The thing you could've done a little better would be the sword. It looks heavy so try to show that it is.
The arm fell in the wrong direction.

Still all in all good job on that one. (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: Blood :O
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 6:52 pm

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Back from holiday... giving you a rust > Rustbreaker
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Post subject: Re: Rustbreaker..
Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2012 8:54 pm

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Needs more frames buddy. But it's still pretty good. (thumbsup)
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Post subject: Re: Rustbreaker..
Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:24 am

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Great animations,brah.U've always been awesome.
The new animaton is really good,I think you just need to fix the blue stick's hands as they are a little stiff from the jump till the landing.And after the second jump his hands are in the same position again.You've got talend,I'd say one long animation is what it takes to get you to interz.
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Post subject: Re: Long time no see?
Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:26 pm

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Post subject: Re: Long time no see?
Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:09 pm

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Imo it's intermediate worthy :)





btw fix your avatar
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Post subject: Re: Long time no see?
Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:11 pm

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Shapka wrote:Imo it's intermediate worthy :)





btw fix your avatar

Thx Shapke hope the others agree with you :P
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Post subject: Re: Long time no see?
Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:26 pm

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Post subject: Re: Long time no see?
Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:20 pm

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Lol you warmed my hearth <3
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