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Looking for criticism and rankings. Thank you.
Looking for criticism and rankings. Thank you.
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Junior
Joined: Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:29 pm
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those are good, but i didnt see any choppyness in the last one
Junior
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High Beginner. Lol, I like the running in your newest creation, Idk why, but it looks funny. Probably because you barely can tell the arms switch sides, (If they do at all, Idk..) The kick test is pretty cool.
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DD Hero
Joined: Fri Apr 06, 2007 5:56 pm
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nice one, i liked the newest creation anim, the blood was nice. Still, you have some things to improve on. Smoothness. Make smaller movements each frame and dont forget to ease. Your movements are choppy and stiff, but you have good ideas. Continue the good work.
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DieHard
Joined: Fri Feb 16, 2007 1:43 am
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Med beginner, Still easing and stiffness seem to be a problem to you. I would also suggest looking at some physics tutorials, and fighting tutorials, the kick was executed very poorly. The animation ideas were good though!
Keep practicing and youll make it to inters in no time, just practice, practice, practice.
Keep up the good work!
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Keep practicing and youll make it to inters in no time, just practice, practice, practice.
Keep up the good work!
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Joined: Sat Apr 12, 2008 9:54 am
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Med-beg I belive, It wasn't very stiff but in some places it was not eased at all, and in some there was to much, like in the kick animation, when an action is finished off you need to smooth it more in the end otherwise that that good I especially liked the blood :).
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Junior
Joined: Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:20 pm
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Location: England
I can't see many flaws at all, physics on the fighting loop thing was a bit off, but mostly great! I loved the kicking test/punch, great physics and all.
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Joined: Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:38 pm
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wow loved the bow and arrow one and good stickmaking skill , id say ur just scraping inter ther3 
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Godlike
Joined: Sat Jan 05, 2008 7:20 pm
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Animation #1.Well, kind of good. It was a little stiff, and why didint that smoke dissapear ?
Animation #2.It was kind of wierd, becouse the man slid back when he shoots. And the bursts were wierd. But the animation itself was good.
Animation #3.Kinda stiff when he pulls back the arrow. And the shooting reaction was bad. Particles were nice though.
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Animation #2.It was kind of wierd, becouse the man slid back when he shoots. And the bursts were wierd. But the animation itself was good.
Animation #3.Kinda stiff when he pulls back the arrow. And the shooting reaction was bad. Particles were nice though.
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