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Post subject: Blast - iPro's intermediate, right?! [CC for CC]
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:08 am

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Sorry if they kind of suck, I have 5 month rust.

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Running Test
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Blast *****
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Sorry about the dumb trails, Gif rape.

Flesh Tear

Halo 3 splatter w/ wheelchair *

Assassination ****

Failed Wu-Test **

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Oh no, oh no! (Yo yo yo) Oh no you didn't! Sucka tried to play me, but you never payed me, never! Oh no you didn't! Payback is a' comin, you will be runnin' foreva! Oh no you didn't! Until I get my vengence, I will never end this.. mayhem! Oh no you didn't! I'm a mercenary, you ain't got a prayer. You owe me!!

Take my word for it, Jinja is as ugly as fuck.
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Post subject: Re: iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:23 am

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Mmmmm, not inter. i say high beg. work on easing, and stfifness more...blood effcts too. curtz?
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Post subject: Re: iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:37 am

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Hay PRO! Its Cake.

I love your new assassination. The blood was awesome. I loved how it squited out.

But the other one was stiff at some times. Just work on stiffness. Everything else seemed to be ok.

Keep it up man.
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Post subject: Re: iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 1:44 am

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It sure is cake :D Yeah, thanks. New animations are gonna be here soon.
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Oh no, oh no! (Yo yo yo) Oh no you didn't! Sucka tried to play me, but you never payed me, never! Oh no you didn't! Payback is a' comin, you will be runnin' foreva! Oh no you didn't! Until I get my vengence, I will never end this.. mayhem! Oh no you didn't! I'm a mercenary, you ain't got a prayer. You owe me!!

Take my word for it, Jinja is as ugly as fuck.
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Post subject: Re: iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 12:49 am

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Hey it's Pro. You're not intermediate. =\
I know it's rust. But here's some CC.
On that failed animation. It was smooth. But the heavy spacing was whacked... you didn't do much easing in the begging. All though, I was looking at it for like a year. LOOOOL! Your assasination animation (Lolrhyme) was stiff. And Blood's, JON'S? WDF?!

Anyways. Make your own uniqe style of blood. Use his for other like head slice in a faced paced animation. Overall, High beginner. Keep striving dude!

Courtesy?
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Post subject: Re: iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 1:31 am

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meh, i think your close
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Post subject: Re: iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:05 am

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Hai,

Assasination - One thing I can see wrong with this animation is that there are hardly any movements. The Wu flicks the blade out, then it flashes to the victim getting stabbed, and flashes again to him bleeding. If you got rid of the flashes and actually animated all the bits inbetween, the animation would be better.

Wu test - The actual kicks are well animated, but the arms are all jumpy and Un-coordinated. And the way he spins is really fast and weird. But I understand that its a fail.

Even though you're rusty, these arent bad.
High beginner

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Post subject: Re: iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:44 am

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The Assassination ani is pretty good but the Wu ani is a bit stiff.
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Post subject: Re: Halo 3 Splatter w/ Wheelchair - iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:15 pm

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Oh no, oh no! (Yo yo yo) Oh no you didn't! Sucka tried to play me, but you never payed me, never! Oh no you didn't! Payback is a' comin, you will be runnin' foreva! Oh no you didn't! Until I get my vengence, I will never end this.. mayhem! Oh no you didn't! I'm a mercenary, you ain't got a prayer. You owe me!!

Take my word for it, Jinja is as ugly as fuck.
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Post subject: Re: Halo 3 Splatter w/ Wheelchair - iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 12:05 am

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its realy good i say high begginner
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Post subject: Re: Halo 3 Splatter w/ Wheelchair - iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:03 am

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Your newest looks pretty good, smooth and good easing but it seems pointless. Assassination was nice I like how you used Jon’s sig in the same environment, the blade was okay but was blocked by his hand and the blood sprays too much. The wu test was okay but the heavy spacing wasn’t that great but I guess that’s why it failed. Sorry for the bad comment, overall just work on spacing and maybe physics.

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Post subject: Re: Flesh Tear - iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:23 am

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Oh no, oh no! (Yo yo yo) Oh no you didn't! Sucka tried to play me, but you never payed me, never! Oh no you didn't! Payback is a' comin, you will be runnin' foreva! Oh no you didn't! Until I get my vengence, I will never end this.. mayhem! Oh no you didn't! I'm a mercenary, you ain't got a prayer. You owe me!!

Take my word for it, Jinja is as ugly as fuck.
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Post subject: Re: Blast - iPro's intermediate, right?!
Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 4:15 am

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Oh no, oh no! (Yo yo yo) Oh no you didn't! Sucka tried to play me, but you never payed me, never! Oh no you didn't! Payback is a' comin, you will be runnin' foreva! Oh no you didn't! Until I get my vengence, I will never end this.. mayhem! Oh no you didn't! I'm a mercenary, you ain't got a prayer. You owe me!!

Take my word for it, Jinja is as ugly as fuck.
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Post subject: Re: Blast - iPro's intermediate, right?! [CC for CC]
Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 5:29 am

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Whoa, I really liked the blast.
Not really a blast though.
More of an energy ball.
But anyways, it looked good.
Some parts were stiff, others had bad easing, and there was choppiness.
The effect overall was nice, though.
I would rank you as Med Begginer.

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Post subject: Re: Blast - iPro's intermediate, right?! [CC for CC]
Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 6:19 am

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Sweet animations man, the first thing i saw right off the block was your awesomeness in camera movements and slow-motion. I say your about high beginner. Why? The blast was good, although the reactions weren't as good. You should of made him like feel the impact hit as hard as it could, not just moderate push. Although I got to say your effects are wicked. Flesh Tear, you should of added blood in the flesh tear, and its not so easy punching into a head and tearing the flesh out... It needs to be more realistic. Other animations, Halo: you got really lazy, the movements are bad and that stooked out big time. Well i guess that was just a camera movement test in my eyes. Assassination was good, you just need to work on physics, a lot. And continue the failed wu test... it looks good... Courtesy returned :D

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