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What I need to work on the most :)

Easing
43
25%
Smoothness
27
16%
Physics
14
8%
Foot Placement
10
6%
Moving Every part of the Stickman
23
13%
Choppyness
20
11%
Movements
21
12%
Effects
3
2%
Originality
3
2%
Stick Creation
3
2%
Backgrounds
2
1%
The Length of the Animation
5
3%
 
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Mr. P
Post subject: new stuff yay
Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 11:35 pm

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My Thread !




Updates
Image I don't even know but I had to finish it :D





I put tests below
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Tests
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kicks

Image Sexy yums lol.

Image STYKZ RUN weeee


Image New run with help from Merk also

Image New walk with help from Merk (thanks)

Image Handstand and effects test.

Image Just ya know, a run



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http://pivotup.com/files/2avglbsy.gif Meow dudes
http://pivotup.com/files/2eipofhg.gif
WOW poo
http://pivotup.com/files/rzobm58k.gif
Doing some power stuff, trying to find the right things to put in mine and QW3RTY's joint :/ lol biggrin)
http://pivotup.com/files/7r1ncgft.gif
And probably the best spaced and smoothed animation biggrin)
http://pivotup.com/files/tdpeb3ro.gif
Inner Conflict ^
http://pivotup.com/files/xa9cyo0j.gif Header
http://pivotup.com/files/aq4p01cy.gif Not sure but look it's cool :D
http://pivotup.com/files/bnsqk3f8.gif Arm Stretch. :D
http://pivotup.com/files/7qvh2lbm.gif I made a bot!!!
http://pivotup.com/files/zdwf4nkt.gif then I used it in stykz!!!
http://pivotup.com/files/mocn9q2d.gif I think it's yummy wink)
http://pivotup.com/files/w2vsafmg.gifIt's my joint with Sorage55 for the Darkphoenix collab 1
http://pivotup.com/files/579w0z1e.gif 3-D pawnch
http://pivotup.com/files/y91nubjg.gifstuuf
http://pivotup.com/files/qc5t2e9n.gifstuff
http://pivotup.com/files/phnt1k6u.gif CRAP
http://pivotup.com/files/so7ch362.gif Flow Test
http://pivotup.com/files/0lrwq4tb.gif Dark universe
http://pivotup.com/files/j8f3ct14.gif if you like big and fast this is the animation for you
http://pivotup.com/files/ieu8g3pa.gif Noob
http://pivotup.com/files/c8xf4hj3.gif Combo
http://pivotup.com/files/t8eib7h9.gif This was actually made with Stykz
http://pivotup.com/files/71crfmy8.gif First attempt at a fight scene
http://pivotup.com/files/sry96mad.gif Don't look at this (Jeez! it's poo)
http://pivotup.com/files/ds5blf23.gif Ball Physics
http://pivotup.com/files/evo9kar1.gif Just making a custom beam(I know the floor is random.)
http://pivotup.com/files/etxlqb74.gif My beginner comp. entry.
http://pivotup.com/files/tv8jrqkn.gif Don't look at this one.
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:57 pm

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Um... Not great. Low beginner. Just because it has motion blurs doesn't mean it is good. But nice try!
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:37 am

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I removed this comment.
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:02 am

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I would say you are low beginner.

You have to move every joint on the stickman so that it looks left stiff.

You should also work on foot placement.

The realism is kinda bad too. When he jumped, he just barely bent his knees and then he flew up in the air.

Also try to ease so that it looks smooth and realistic and it will also take out the choppiness.

Courtesy?!
Mr. P
Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:04 am

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Update up above
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Tim
Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:10 am

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Unless you're making a substantial update, don't double post.
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 5:58 pm

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Another update (actually from today) is at the top
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 8:01 pm

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I'll be utterly honest here. It's not much. I can't give much constructive criticism because there's so much wrong, but one thing that I like about you is you make your own sticks, which to me is probably the most important things.

Just keep practicing. The more you do, the more your style will develop. Don't be afraid to try new stuff. Even if it's not great at first, it's something of your own than YOU can refine, rather than just learning stuff that thousands of other people before you have done.
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 8:06 pm

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Thanks! cheesygrin)
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 8:31 pm

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low beginner
I see you have started pivot
you have lots of great ideas and potential
keep it up!

Now, your movements are a little off, you got some stiffness so try to get rid of it. Easing is also a little problem I see, check some spacing and easing tuts and you'll be an expert at it in no time!

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Nao, u pplz may be askin', Shad0wriderz has animated for a long time but still isn't that good. Well, the fact is, i only have time to animate on Saturdays cuz of school and other things i have to do.
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:37 am

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Update
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:40 am

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All I have to say is really just typical beginner stuff(ie. stiff, static, no apparent use of spacing and easing, poor effects). Don't worry though. You'll improve :) Sorry if that seemed harsh at all, I just didn't really know how to get specific. Just keep following tuts, and don't rush through movements.

Courtesy returned.
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Post subject: Re: A better animatoin than the first
Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:42 am

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crap, I must try harder, thanks again for the courtz
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Mr. P
Post subject: Re: TheIcyPenguins Animations/Updates
Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:09 pm

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Post subject: Re: TheIcyPenguins Animations/Updates
Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:12 pm

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TheIcyPenguin wrote:Update

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This is me trying to do some physics with a ball

I can see the improvement...But there are still many things wrong, but you can fix them with some practice. Try easing more, that's your first step as a beginner.
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